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Jodie


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11/28/2010 | |
Once apon a time on albia there was a very patent grendel he craved nothing more than being freinds with the norns he try'd evreything he could but he just got hit evrey time he try'd First he gave the Norns a Morning glory but onley to find out it was Nightshade and got chased off The next day he gave the Norns some cheese but the Norns thought the grendel stole the cheese but one norn call'd serah like'd the grendel and knew that he just wanted to be freinds she sneaked off from the Gardon and ran off through the Jungle to the Famus yiggisal tree she then wisperd "Grendel come" the Grendel looke'd through the Leafs and saw the Purple mounton norn and said "Gah narg" and took the lift down to meet Serah Serah then said "Grendel eat seed" and walked over to the Submarine the Grendel followd her and said "vovo uig sese" as he followd they where just in time as the sub was just about to leave the hatch closed and Both Serah and the grendel was in the sub "Serah scard" She said the grendel said "vovo narg" then the submarin reatched the island they both took the lift up and the Grendel smashed some coconuts and both Serah and the Grendel had a fun romantic day eating coconuts and playing with the beatchball Serah said "Serah bord" the Grendel then said "Narg toy" and they both listend to the raidio together then Serah kissed the Grendel and as it was time to go back to the gardon Serah took the Raft back with the Grendel "Serah reatreat" she said as she left running to the Gardon the grendel took the lift up back to his home the Yiggasal and that is the story of the Patent Grendel
It is based on what happond in my C1 game
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Deskman
 
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11/28/2010 | |
please try to use more paragraphs your story.
Also try to proofread your story, if you could, it's really difficult to read for other people otherwise. 
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Harlequinade
 
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12/4/2010 | |
Is it just my imagination, or are there no periods in that story? |
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