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Jodie


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9/27/2010 | |
Well you know about the lone shee and the banshee but do you know abot the little lost Shee? I guss not It starts on the shee ark...
CRASH!
"Jodie wake up wake up!!!" Jodies mum was shaking her awake Jodie Opend her eyes "WHAT!" Jodie moaned Jodies mum looked upset and said "Grendels they are attacking the ark we need to escape Jodie Come on!" Jodie couldn't belive her ears "Grendels?" Jodies said in Amazment. All of a suddon the wall Smased and 3 big Grendels came in Jodie and her mum Screamed "HEEEEEEELLLLLLPPPPPP" The grendels lashed out Jodie got away but her mum was Captured by those Big Grendels (They are banshee grendels) Jodie was hiding behind the learning computer Hoping the Grendels would leave and they did. Jodie sneaked out from behind the learning compurter and wonderd out of her room and saw no one was there "Hello?" Jodie nervusley whimperd "anyone there?" Suddenley a grendel jumped out from the shadows "GAAAAAAA!!!" The grendel Yelled. Jodie Screamed for Help and ran away "MUMMY HEEELLP" Jodie screamed as she ran Jodie saw a teliporter and rushed to it.
Meanwhile in C1 Albia
"Well how's your norn breed going my young fellow?"
A young boy shee said "Going good the Bannanahuggers look helthey in those eggs"
Suddenley Jodie apperd and so did the Grendel the poor old Shee ended up wearing his tea and almost had a heart attack "G G GRENDEL" The boy Screamed and grabbed the eggs "Stay back Grendel!!!" The boy Shouted waving a stick at the grendel. The grendel Grinned and grabbed the boys stick and snapped it and Growled "Give me my Dinner!" The Boy Growled back "NEVER!!!" and ran following Jodie. The old Shee asked the grendel if it wanted some tea The grendel looked confused and then Chasd after Jodie and the Boy.
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Malkin
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9/27/2010 | |
This is a very suspenseful story! It could benefit from more descriptions to immerse the reader in the world. Show, don't tell. 
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Jodie


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9/28/2010 | |
Ok thanks Malkin ^-^
Jodie and the Boy carrying the Norneggs Ran though the deep dark Jungle full of odd plants and Critters and Bugs Jodie wisperd "It smells like Damp norn fur here" The boy said "well young madom I'm Jordan who are you?" Jodie giggled "I'm Jodie" The boy sighed "Grendels why are thay so Hostile?" Jodie Grubleld "Becuse we created them with junk DNA how do you think you would act if you found out!" Jordan looked down and then Herd Somthing "Did you hear that Jodie?" He wisperd Jodie Wisperd back "yeh I did" Jodie and Jordan looked around Back to back "What was it?" Jordan Wisperd Jodie saw a Shadow that very Grendelish "THERE!" Jodie Shouted a female Banshee grendle ran off leaving an odd egg it was rockey like in texture and looked beutiful well in Jodies eyes. Jordan ran to smash the Grendel egg but Jodie Stopped him "Don't Smash the Grendel Egg!" Jodie Shouted Jordan Shouted "What are you a banshee or somthing it's a GRENDEL EGG!!!" Jodie looked at the egg then looked at Jordan "well I allways had a thing for grendels" Jodie mutterd. Jordan Jumped Back You are a banshee I knew it!" Jodie looked upset Jordan notaced what he had done "well I guss some banshees can be nice" he did a face simuler to this ^^' Jodie Gggled well I guss some Grendels can be nice too" Jodie cradeld the Grendel egg in her arms.
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Jodie


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9/28/2010 | |
As they walked through the Jungle they saw many odd and beutiful things as Jordan walked he tripped over a root Jodie ran over to see if he was ok he was quick to cheack the Norn eggs to see if there ok He sighed with relife Jodie giggled and walked on carrying her Grendel egg who Jorden Compleatley refused to carry. Jodie got thirsty and looked for water and found a warting hole Jordan felt kinda well "I'm not Drinking that water who knows what has been in it!" Jodie sighed "Well it's better than dying of thirst right mr Whiney" Jordan Looked at Jodie then gave in "Well Ladies first" Jodie got a stone and shaped it into a cup shape Jordan watched and tryed to copy Jodie, Jodie got the cup and scooped up the water out of the waterhole Jorden did the same but the water fell out of his cup because his cup had a hole in. They both had a good Drink of water.
Meanwhile The old shee was wondering what has happend to the ark due to it being missing from it's spot and wonderd who that little girl shee was and if his Aprentice was ok "ok hes ok there ok that grendel wont hurt them Sigh I wonder if those little Sheelings are ok?" The old shee couldent take it anymore and set out with his old freind Hardyman Norn "Ok Handy are you ready?" The Old hardyman norn said "yes me ready me Help Shee an Hit Grendel" The old shee set out into the deep dark Jungle with his old hardyman Norn next to him...
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Jodie


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10/1/2010 | |
As Jodie and Jorden walked Jodie felt some movment in her Grendel egg "It's Moving!" Jodie Shouted Jordan looked confusedley and said "What?!" The egg started to crack and the roof of the eggshell flew off and a little banshee cross Jungle Grendel Hatched "Gah" the Grendeling said. Jodie Giggled and Jordan backed away and whimperd "keep that beast away from me plese?" Jodie sighd "It's a baby", as Jodie and Jordan argued In the shadows of the Canopy the Grendel was watching them. The baby Grendel said "me goo gregel" Jodie Giggled "I will call you Greg", Greg looked at Jodie and said "Grreg" Jodie Smiled "Greg". Greg giggled "me Greg" Jodie Giggled happily and jordan kept a look out for any "bad" Grendels. As the Grendel watched he lost his grip on a Brantch and fell "GAHHHHHHHH!!!" The grendel Screamed and he fell on Jordan "AHHHHHHHH!!!" Jordan Screamed "GET THIS THIS EVIL BEAST OFF ME!!!" Jodie looked and went pail as she saw that grendel was the one that chased her "JORDAN THE NORN EGGS!!!" Jodie Screamed as they rolled down a hill with little Greg trying to catch them. The big Grendel woke up and picked up Jordan but as soon as he saw Greg he Dropped Jordan and went to get Greg Jodie Grabbed the Grendel to stop him but she ended up being Dragged by the Grendel "Gah you let Go!" The grendel Shouted but Jodie didn't let go "grrr Fine I will Ignore you!" The grendel Growled and continued running after Greg. Jordan was left there on his own in the Jungle "well atleast i'm not stuck to a grendel he he" Jordan herd a Bat flying "WAIT FOR ME!!!" Jordan ran after the grendel and Jodie.
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Malkin
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10/2/2010 | |
Gah, what will happen next!?!?!?! XD
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Jodie


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10/4/2010 | |
Jodie was holding tight to the Grendels scaily leg and was trying not to let go "LEAVE GREG ALONE!" The Grendel stopped "Greg? ha thats a name a onley shee would love!" He looked at Jodie "And I'm corect" Jordan ran panting up to the grendel "uh you huff leave puff her Alone!" Then passed out "JORDAN" Jodie shouted and let go frogeting about the grendel as It ran off "oh no jordan are you ok?" Jordan opend his eyes and blushed and said "Yes yes uh off to catch the grendel right? hehe (Gulp)" Jodie giigled "lets get it!" Suddenley a hardyman norn bursterd though the Bushes "Ha me find lost Shee" He laughed then the old shee walked over "oh Jordan and Mystory shee I was soo worrid" Jodie looked confused and said "i'm Jodie nice to meet you" The old shee looked around and heard a grendelish Squeel "GREG!" Jodie screamed and ran off as fast as lightning "Woh peppy younge Shee isn't she?" The old shee said Jordan just looked amazed at her speed then try'd to follow her "Plese slow down Jodie? Jodie? JODIE!!!!" Jodie coulen't hear him as she ran following where she heard the Sceam of Greg "GREG GREG!!!?" Jodie shouted as she ran then she saw him "GREG!" and saw the big grendel had him and the eggs "LET THEM GO!!!" Jodie Screamed and the way she attacked the grendel looked like a hardyman norn Jordan couldent belive his eyes "S..Sh....Shes Crazy" He said he saw the norn eggs and slowley sneaked towards the Fighting Grendel and stole the Norn eggs back Jodie swiped Greg back Gregs expression was like this O.o He was terrified and amazed "goo?" Greg said in a confused voice Jodie ran off with jordan leaving the Big grendel in the dust "GAHH I WILL GET YOU YOU SHEEE!!!" He screamed before he used his teliporter to teliport home Jodie ran giggling with happyness and Jordan ran full of Fear "DID YOU HEAR HIM JODIE HES GOING TO KILL YOU!" Jodie giggled "Let him try I allways trained evan through I love grendels one must allways be propared" Jordan looked with his jaw dropped "well well uh well..... I don't know he he (Why do I get myself in these problems)" Jodie looked around as the old shee arrived and he was confused to see Greg "a grendel as a pet?" The old shee said confused "yep his names Greg" Greg smiled shyley at Handy
What will happen next time stay tuned in these foumes as I will post the next part as soon as I manage to make it ^-^
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Jodie


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10/9/2010 | |
Greg shyley waved at Handy who didn't like Greg "No Grendel as pet Grendel bad me Intencley Dislike greg!" Handy Growled Jodie Giggled "He's a baby stop being nasty" Handy was not Impressed and Stamped off Angrey and full of Disapointment "Me Dislike Jodie" he mumerd to Himself. At night after walking to the old shee's house Jodie looked at the moon "I hope mum's ok?" Jodie never likes to let people see her sad so she Ingnores her emotions untill no one can see her "I wonder if she's ok?" Greg walked in from his own bedroom "goo why Jodie sad?" He said confused Jodie looked at Greg and smiled a weak fake smile "oh nothing Greg anywas you shold be asleep" Greg looked sad at Jodie "Me have bad Dream" Jodie picked Greg up "oh it's just a nighmere Greg you'll be ok" Greg cryed "In Bad dream you hurt by big grendel you Intensley Hurt you rest an not get up" Jodie Sighed and sang Greg a lullibie "Oh my sweet baby plese don't cry I will hold you and you will be safe Plese don't cry my baby oh plese don't cry I love you with all my heart and I will protect you Plese don't cry my sweet little Baby as the Tears bring rain oh Don't cry my Sweet little baby oh my sweet little Baby" Jodie started crying as that was the Lullibie her mum used to sing to her as a baby. Greg looked confused "Why Jodie sad me confused maybie Think?" Jodie Sniffled and said "Oh Greg I miss my Mummy" Greg Said "Where your mummy?" Jodie Cryed "The Gre..." Then stopped "well my mum is in a lot of truble right now and I can't help her" Greg sadley said "Me hope she ok but we maybie Rest now?" Jodie Rubbed the tears from her eyes "yeah me should sleep now Night Greg" Greg Giggled "Night Jodie me rest now"
In the morning
Jodie was fast asleep in her bed the sun glased through the window right on her face "gah stupid sun Sigh now I'm awake I better cheak on greg" as she walked out of her room after getting Dressed out of her PJ's and went to Gregs room "Morning Gre... Greg where are you? Greg Greg GREG!?"
Where is Greg who knows but in the Next post I do here will possibley say where he is I wonder if handy has anything to do with this?
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Jodie


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10/24/2010 | |
As Jodie looked around franticley Handy was grinning an evilish grin Jodie saw this and wasn't happy "YOU! WHERE IS GREG!?" Handy smiled "gone now retreated to grendel home go bye bye" Jodie didn't belive him "I SAID WHERE IS GREG!?" Jodie growled Handy flintched as he didn't want to make a shee angrey "uh um IN CUPBORD!" Handy shouted and ran off Jodie went to the Cupbord and greg was in there eating the old shee's faverite cookies "GREG!" Jodie shouted joyfully Greg giggled "Handy said food in this and locked me in" Jodie giggled "well we will have a word with that handy to make sure that won't happen again" Jordan half asleep came in "what is with aaalllll (yarn) the Comotion?" He asked then Snapped awake "NO THE COOKIES OH HE ISN'T GOING TO LIKE THIS!" Jodie and Greg looked down in shame but Handy giggled a mischevus giggle Jordan pointed at Handy "Handy go to the ark to get the cookies plese take this teliporter" Handy Grumbled "yes Jordan" and took the teliporter and used it but as soon as he left he came back his skin was pail white and he had a terrified expression and whimperd "B...Ba....BANSHEE ON ARK NO JOKE!" Jodie and Jordan jumped back in shock and the Old shee ran in "WHAT!?" he shouted Handy looked frozen in terror so he wasn't lying "I hope your ok did they hurt you?" Jodie asked Handy shook his head saying no but in his eyes he was saying yes "Well atleast your ok Handy" The old shee said Jodie felt Handy wasn't telling them what he has seen but didn't want to put on anymore stress to poor Handy Greg asked "What's a Banshee?" Jodie just anserd "A Monster that haunts many shees in there Nightmers" There was a long dedley silent pause where evan the birds and grasshoppers stoped making there music it was very quiet for the minite it is said that the mere mention of the Banshee strikes fear into all creatures who hear it suddenley Jordan shouted "THER MOVING!" as the norn eggs where hatching "Bannana norns come on into this world" Jordan wisperd suddenley one of the eggshells flew off to show a small male norn who was acting tuff whilst the other egg was moving but was struggling to hatch but the male norn puntched a hole in the eggshell to help his futer mate hatch a weak almost dead girl nornling hatched Jodie grabbed it and rubbed its back "come on come on breath will ya" as if it was a mirical the baby girl Bannanahugger started to breath normaley and opend her eyes "i'll call her Bannana" Jodie said cradling bannana in her arms jordan hesitated to respond from shock of what he just seen "uh... Oh I'll call him Bannano" Jodie giggled happiley
As the all the eggs have hatched and now the Ark has been hyjacked by the Banshee what will happen next? wait and see....
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