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deadhumourist

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2/1/2010 | |
Heyo I started a story ages ago, which sort of tells the backstory of the Shee,how the creatures came about, and what happened from there on. It features 4 Shee professors and some cute norns uncovering a big plot.
If anyone's interested I'l post a link - I didn't want to stick it on here immediately because it's like 30 pages long (and not done). Hands up if you want to take a peek |

Malkin
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2/1/2010 | |
I'm interested! 
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scoota94
    
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2/1/2010 | |
Me me me! I mean it sounds good! 
Don't be worried about who is right, Just follow you heart... |

Melody
    
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2/1/2010 | |
(XD) I'd like to have a look! 
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SpringRain
   
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2/2/2010 | |
I'm interested. I always enjoy a good fan fiction! 
I'm back again after being away a handful of years. 2026 Revamp, Baby! |

deadhumourist

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2/2/2010 | |
Ok Its uploaded and all. Just a few things....
This story was started a good few years ago, so if you notice a difference in writing style, its me aging, lol.
The story's scope is well..big. I get tired just thinking of everything I still have to incorporate. Its only halfway done, so you know there's big stuff coming.
I do make reference to well known breeds and objects, and not everything I say about it is factually correct. The idea was to blend fact and fiction to such a degree that it forms a seamless story.
I hope you enjoy it even if you just get to page one, and of course comments and criticism is always welcome
Turned - The First 5 Chapters |

scoota94
    
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2/2/2010 | |
I liked it ^~^ can't wait for more 
Don't be worried about who is right, Just follow you heart... |

SpringRain
   
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2/2/2010 | |
Oh, oh, a link! Thank you very much. *clicks it*
Edit: deadhumourist, you're a fantastic author!! All I can say right now is: this is brilliant and awesome and I want MOAR!
Lol. Keep up the great writing! I'm a fan.
I'm back again after being away a handful of years. 2026 Revamp, Baby! |

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2/4/2010 | |
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Oh my... that was excellent. I can't wait to see more of it.
And, now that I think of it, it sounded a bit familiar to me as well. Did you happen to post a draft of this on ff.net at one point? Because I could have sworn I once read a story over there where the Shee had white blood.
You have to be honest with yourself when you are writing. If that leads to somewhere unexpected then perhaps you really needed to go there.
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2/6/2010 | |
That was great! You've got some brilliant writing skills. ^^
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deadhumourist

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2/7/2010 | |
Aw thanks guys, I really appreciate the compliments If you keep this up I might not be able to get through the door due to a swollen head,lol. I kid
Officer 1BDI: You're absolutely right - I did post it on ff.net years ago. This version, however, has progressed and was edited quite a bit.
(Thanks Laura, for making the link clickable, Im still a noob to the forums ) |
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2/8/2010 | |
(No problem. You can find the codes for the forum commands here in the Information section)
This story is a pleasure to read so far. I think you write like a published author, deadhumourist! I can see why you mentioned in your profile that you've been writing since you learnt how to spell - it shows. I'm reading the opening, and it doesn't feel like I'm reading a simple piece of fanfiction. It feels like I've just picked up a book from the shelf. 
Edit: I've just finished reading what there is of it so far, and I can't wait to read more of it - a really compelling, interesting story and I think your descriptions capture C2 Albia well.  |

deadhumourist

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3/6/2010 | |
Thank you! thank you *throws pumperspikel seed confetti on the crowd*. You've all fired up my writing mojo. I'l get writing again  |
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3/7/2010 | |
Oh goody, looking forward to that! I want to know what happens next in the story, lol.  |