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Strangeo Forum Creatures Poetry    scoota94      12/20/2009  1 Well I thought there wasnt enough poetry in this forum so here goes... As it floats eerily in the air Making me nervous, ruffles my hair The first thing I see when I hatch from my egg The last thing I see before I am dead As it guides me through my life With pats tickles and slaps alike I question my dependance on this oddy Who somehow has no body! I will let you all decide who is wrong and who is right? Is it good or is it bad? The truly wonderous, godlike hand! review pleese! Don't be worried about who is right, Just follow you heart...   Melody   12/20/2009 Awesome! I really liked it. I'll see if I can make one up later.   Malkin Manager     12/20/2009 Wow. So rarely do we see pieces on the moral ambiguity of our role as the hand. I like the image of the hand ruffling a norn's hair - I've often wished I could actually do that. Maybe next time experiment with another rhyming scheme? My TCR Norns   deadhumourist   3/6/2010 I like it! The contrast between calling the hand an oddy (haha) and commenting that it observes life and death is actually sort of eerie. But good eerie   ATP-Decoupler     9/6/2010  1 Mine are silly Ettin's Lament I wish an ettin I was not My home, the desert, is too hot I roam the ship in constant pain When my task stops, it starts again I see the hand an import getting Oh my, what's this? A male ettin! As now I kisspop gleefully, An ettin I am glad to be The Greening of the Grendel The grendel was once furry brown A coat one grend detested Though he could blend in with the norns He longed for something festive Began to scour the land for paint But chanced 'pon a machine So put himself inside one pod The other, something green That lizard did not know its fate Nor did our grendel hero Once button pushed and lever pulled Their form reduced to zero Out from a nozzle popped an egg It soon began to crack Emerged from it a brand new grend Red eyes and hump in back But unlike those that walked before A spectacle unseen Was this new grendel, void of fur All scales and mottled green The norns all turned and ran in fear This species was now threat'ning Soon grendels became shunned by all Including shee and ettin The lizard grendel's reptile ways Would soon come to the fore With brood created, he now seeks Revenge with tooth and claw   Harlequinade   11/26/2010 Just getting this out there, my favourite rhyme pattern is A B C C B

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