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Wup



  5/27/2007

Last Stand is a story that I've had in my head for a while, and it'll feel good to finally get it out onto paper. :D It will be mainly about several small colonies of norns of various breeds, on a docked Shee Ark plauged with huge packs of grendels during a wolfling run.

Just a note, I tried to be the most realistic I could about this story, all agents are real and how time passes is believable for a creature-- instead of 'last year', they'll say 'last hour'.

CHAPTER ONE: Enter Moonshadow

Moonshadow opened his eyes to find that his mother was not in their nest; she had probably left early to scavenge for food. Not much was left after the grendels awakened and gathered fruit, nuts, and ,if any strayed from the trees, norns. The Ark was being overrun with grendels, and no one could seem to find the hand anywhere. Moonshadow sat up and inspected his purple bengal fur for any ants that may have crawled through the open doorway while they were asleep. Satisfied, he forced himself up to see if he could find any Pumperspikel nuts in the upper part of the network of treehouses and bridges. He walked out of the twig and mud hut and closed the door behind him. He walked down to the lift and went up. His friend Tawny, a female fallow nornling about Moonshadow's age, was already scooping up some nuts."Oh, hey Shadow! I'm surprized you had enough guts to get this close to the grendels' gate!", she joked and tossed a nut at Moonshadow. He caught it with a stern look at Tawny. "You shouldn't waste the food. Who knows when they'll cut off the food supply completely, and you shouldn't be yelling up here. The guards know how to kill you know; what happend to the group of rebels last hour taught me that--" Moonshadow stopped at the mention of the rebel group. His father, his older brother Martin, Tawny's mother, And many other norns launched an attack on the gate from the Norn Terrerium to the Jungle Terrerium. They underestimated how many eggs the leading pair, Vekke and Nafaria, were making. None of the fighters lived. Tawny wrinkled her nose at Moonshadow. "Forget it, Shadow. It's not like we're going to survive this thing," She grunted as she lifted her pile of nuts and began to walk away. "They made slaves of the ettins because that's what they were made to do. In their eyes, we were made to die at their claws. We're good as extinct without the hand. As long as she's gone," Tawny climbed into the elevator with the nuts, "We daon't have to care anymore." Moonshadow watched as the lift went down, and sighed. He sat on the edge of the platform, and took a bite out of the nut Tawny had thrown at him. He sat there, watching the artificial sun rise over the treetops.


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  5/28/2007

Cool story!
Me like it lots :3

 
Wup

Wup



  5/28/2007

Thankies! :D The idea is rather cool, isn't it?
Actually, Moonshadow is a real norn! ^.^ If a lot of people like my story once it's finished, maybe I'll post the actual creatures in the adoption center.


Chapter Two: Enter Yyam

Yyam was at home in the desert, playing tag with the other young ettins. His pale fur rippled in the rare current of wind. He closed his eyes for a moment, and everything was gone. He was back in the ettin prison in the jungle. "WAKE UP, you slobbering worthless freaks!" a guard screeched at them. They all got up; exept for one. "No," Yyam couldn't help but whisper. The dead ettin was his dear friend Hera. She had been chosen by the elders in thier clan, now killed, to be Yyam's future mate. She was gone now. "You! Ettin! What are you doing over there!" another guard yelled,"Is that...oh. A dead one." The guard said something to the other guard. Guard #1 went up to the surface with the ettins. Guard #2 walked straight through the Selective Force Field* which was apparently set to 'Ettins, all ages' and walked up to Yyam and Hera's body. At first Yyam thought that maybe she would try to console him. He was wrong. The guard grabbed him by the neck. "Did you kill this ettin?" she asked calmly but sternly. "N-no. I just found her like this..."Yyam choked out. The guard threw Yyam over her shoulder, over the force field. I'm free!...Well, almost. The guard seemed to be engrossed in checking over the body, so Yyam attempted to sneak towards the lift. She didn't notice. He reached to press the button. A huge male grendel grabbed his neck from behind. She sure noticed that. He soon found himself back in Nafaria's chamber; changing the straw and moss bedding. As the day ended, word came from his friends that a young female ettin slave had attempted to steal one of Nafaria's eggs. They said that she was killed and eaten by Nafaria herself, but the only actions that Yyam had ever seen her take were nervously pulling her eggs closer to her and growling at the ettins when they were around. Yyam thought for sure they were lying, until, as he headed for the ettin cell, he saw that one of the eggs had hatched, and the hatchling was gnawing on a bit of meat, with Nafaria beaming behind it. Yyam curled up in a dent in the floor of the cell and tried to sleep. He just couldn't. Oh, come on, that won't happen to me. I'm smart enough to not grab one of her eggs! And yet, still, Yyam felt uneasy as the day turned to night, the artifitial sun sinking behind the trees.

*The Selective Force Field is, like I said before I even started typing, a real agent.


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Wup

Wup



  6/9/2007

Next chapter!

Chapter Three: The Capture (part one)

The next day, Moonshadow woke very early to carry a pile of Pumperspikel nuts home. After doing that, he decided to get a look at the Grendels' gate. He hadn't seen the door to the jungle since he was just a child. Moonshadow creeped along the treebridges to the door. Crouching in the shadows, Moonshadow saw the most horrible thing he had ever seen. A line of norn skulls went along the top of the doorway. Vines had been weaved in and out of them for decoration. The sliding doors had been removed, and instead there were strips of norn fur hanging from the top. Moonshadow thought that the skulls were looking down at something. They were. A few hours ago, a grazer wool mat was sent to the grendels from the norns as an unsucessful peace offering. That was now in front of the doorway. The skulls had been positioned to face it for a reason:the rug had been stained with their own blood. Moonshadow vomited ove the side of the bridge and went a bit closer. He could see words scrawled in blood on the wall above the skulls. Marco, Elizabeth, Steven.... They were the skulls of the norns in the group that tried attacking their base. Moonhadow vomited again and began to run back home. "HEY! Who's there?" a male boomed from inside the jungle. RUN!, he screamed in his head. Without thinking, he tried to jump off the platform into the pond below. It would kill him, but at least it wouldn't be as bad as the grendels doing it. He sailed down about three feet before being caught by the ankle. His head began to hurt, then everything went black.


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Dreamnorn

Dreamnorn



  6/14/2007

Nice story :).

Hawksight



 
Wup

Wup



  8/21/2007

After a looooong hiatus, Last Stand is back, baby! :)

Chapter Three: The Capture (part two)

Moonshadow woke with a start. It was dark here, and the ground was slightly damp. He tried to get up, but he became dizzy and laid back down again with a discouraged thump.
"Awake, eh?" a somewhat harsh voice came from beside him. It was only then that he realized that he was wearing handcuffs, and that the voice had come from behind tightly spaced bars. A teenage banshee grendel female leaned against the bars, her golden eyes watching hs every move. Moonshadow groaned as he rubbed his aching head.
"Wha... Where am I?", he mumbled. The grendel chuckled and brushed some hair our of her face.
"You've been captured and you're now in the dungeons of the Yggdrasil. Good enough answer for yeh?"
Moonshadow sat up and leaned against the back wall of his cell.
"Great. I have a family and friends to help, and now I'm going to meet my certain doom. Perfect." He picked up a small pebble and tossed it from hand to hand.
The female looked sympathetic for a moment, then sat near down the bars of Moonshadow's cell.
"I have a confession to make."
"What?"
"I'm not a grendel."
"WHAT?!? How is that possible?" Moonshadow looked over her features again. She was a grendel, no doubt about it.
"I'm not a grendel. The hand spliced a grendel and a norn and I popped out. I look exactly like my 'father' but underneath the scales I'm a norn, like my 'mother'. If I can really call them that..." The female grenorn dismally stared at the damp ground.
Moonshadow was absolutely speechless.
"If you're really a norn, why are you here?"
The grenorn shook her head.
"I'm part of an anti-grendel force hiding in the lower creator room. We have big food storage areas and computers and everything. I have been sent as a spy. I vouleneered to guard you to help you escape."
Moonshadow thanked the hand for his luck.
"Really?"
"No, not really."
"Neither of them had noticed the jigantic Yeren grendel slink behid them and listen to their entire conversation.


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Dreamnorn

Dreamnorn



  8/21/2007

Awesome. ;) Hawksight wants MORE! :o


 
Wup

Wup



  8/21/2007

Then the grendel stabbed them both with a sword and that was the end of them. A troop of grendels smashed the rebel base and the grendels won the war and ruled the ship. Everyone lived happily ever after.




NOT!

I have writer's block. I'm on hiatus again. :)


ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
Dreamnorn

Dreamnorn



  8/21/2007

:o :o

No wonder you're username's "EvilSpirit"... :P

I hope the writer's block ends soon. :D *prays before mystic Shee idol*



 
Wup

Wup



  12/25/2007

I have ideas now! But I have yet to write the next chapter.

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 


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