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Draconorn
    
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4/13/2007 | |
*Brain overloads and explodes* Urm, I haven't decided yet. 6_9
Wait till you read about the Heather Plains, they're pwetty.
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“I work with Draconorn, stupid.” The man snapped. “I’m a bounty hunter, it’s my job to seek out and take down the monsters that the citizens of Malurien and the Mods don’t want round here, the beasties that go out of their way to try and hurt people. I salvage whatever I can from what I kill, because the hide, teeth, etc from the nasty monsters is rare and expensive. I make a fortune, honestly.”
Then he grinned. “You were right to be suspicious, though. Not everything here is cute and fluffy, like my pal Daxter.” A bright orange weasel like creature jumped up onto his shoulder. “Well, if these two aren’t coming, can we scram? I want to get to the nearest city for a nice bath.” Daxter the ottsel complained.
The man ignored Daxter. “My name’s Jak, I can get you to the Plains a whole heap faster.”
“Thanks Jak.” Bloo butted in, drowning out Mac’s reply. “How?”
Jak went back into the trees and pulled out some kind of vehicle. “This is a zoomer, they’re light, speedy and get you where you want to go nice and fast.”
“But they explode if they get bumped!” Daxter announced and Mac went green at the thought.
He sat on the driver’s seat, and Mac and Bloo jumped onto the back.
The zoomer suddenly lifted off the ground, surprising Bloo. “It’s a hover vehicle!” Mac cried, and Jak rolled his eyes irritably.
The zoomer shot away into the forest, and Mac found himself being whacked in the face by leaves and wind.
Chapter Three - Yllamar
After a long, bumpy and uncomfortable ride, during which Daxter constantly told them not to worry if they crashed because it would be a quick and painless death, Mac and Bloo finally got to tumble off the Zoomer.
When they had finished complaining and massaging sore thighs, they looked around.
The Heather Plains were very different to the woods. Flat grassland rolled away into the distance in every direction except behind, where the woods started. A sort of purple haze hung over everything, and the plain was covered mostly in lilac heather, with tufts of bright yellow gorse and lush green grass here and there.
It was beautiful, if a little depressing. The sheer size of it made you feel small.
“So, where did you guys see Draconorn, if I’m right in guessing you’re Mods?” Jak asked abruptly.
“Erm, we met her back in the woods, where we first started. Right in the middle.” Mac said, going from what he remembered of the map on the stone.
“Thanks” Jak said, and picked a bunch of heather and wild flowers from the ground before jumping back on the zoomer. The roar of the engine nearly drowned out his last sentences: “If you guys need me again, just send me a letter by carrier pigeon. They’re not like the birds where you’re from; they’re fast, smart and know exactly where you want to get the message. I’ll get to you as fast as I can, OK?”
Mac nodded, then Jak grinned and zoomed away into the Woods. “Byyyyyyyyyye!” Daxter could be heard yelling.
“Whoa! Did you see those guns? He’s cool!” Bloo exclaimed, and then started up an imaginary fight scene that was noisy and involved a lot of spitting.
“Bloo, you need to learn to say it, not spray it!” Mac groaned.
“-AND SUPER BLOO SAVES THE DAY!” Bloo whooped.
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4/17/2007 | |
CASSIOPE! (My new 'frustration yell/curse)
Where are the White Arctic Mountain Heather!?
*Humph!* I can't believe you left out my favorite kind of Heather.
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4/18/2007 | |
Hh? White arctic what?
Oh dammit, this bit is embarrassing. It's a major spoiler for the Imperia Albia Comics too. (And by the way, the Draconorn in DIMENSION is my alter ego, not me o_o)
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“I wonder what the flowers were for? Well, if I’m right in what I’m thinking, Jak won’t get much luck. Aaron’s dating Draconorn.” Mac thought aloud, and Bloo went skidding to a halt.
“What?! You’re kidding? Draconorn’s dating Aaron?” Bloo said sceptically, crossing his arms.
“She told me. Well, she’s sort of dating him. You see, she doesn’t want it to go too far because she’s immortal, while she knows that Aaron will have to die some day like everybody else.” Mac explained. “But, it’s not been going too well recently. She and Aaron keep having fights. Drac told me that he’s way over-protective of her when she simply talks to another guy, but whenever he gets the chance to spend time with her he does something else. Draconorn will end up killing him out of frustration one of these days.”
“Aw, that’s so sad!” Bloo grinned cheerfully. “A true soap opera.”
Mac nodded absently, and they walked in no particular direction across the plains.
Soon, not far away they saw…
“A city!” Bloo cried, shocked. They raced towards it.
The city was big, tall and angular, so it contrasted oddly with the soft, rolling flatness of the Plains. Massive spires rose from behind the walls, and a river ran into the city through a water gate in the thick stone wall.
A large sign stood outside the city gates. Mac went up to the sign and read it out:
“Welcome to Helm’s Creek, the largest city in Heather Plains!”
“Is that it?” Bloo said grumpily.
“No, there’s a load of other stuff. There’s two maps on it too, one of the Plains and one of Elysium.” Mac said. “The name rings a bell, Helm’s Creek, Helm’s…”
“You’re thinking of Helm’s Deep, from Lord of the Rings.” Draconorn appeared behind Mac, making him jump. “We named Helm’s Creek after it, but replaced ‘Deep’ with ‘Creek’ because the river runs through the city.”
“Um… hi Drac.” Bloo mumbled sheepishly, putting his stubby hands behind his back.
“You two have been naughty boys!” Draconorn growled, her voice rising to a shout. “You’re supposed to be keeping an eye on game players! I had to sort out a major fight earlier all by myself!”
“It was Bloo’s idea!” Mac said hurriedly, pointing at his imaginary friend.
Draconorn turned on Bloo, eyes flaming.
“What about your partner Aaron?” Bloo squealed, putting his arms defensively over his face. “I thought he was supposed to be helping you on your shift?”
Draconorn seemed to deflate before him. “We had another fight. He dropped out, went back to our world to talk to Spike.”
Mac remained silent.
Draconorn turned to him and gave him a bag and a book. “The book will tell you everything you need to know about being a Mod in Malurien. I forgot to give it to you earlier.”
“What’s in the bag?” Mac asked, peeking inside it.
“Money, dumdum. How else are you supposed to buy food and rent rooms?” Draconorn snapped. She was clearly very unhappy.
Simba came out of the city and walked towards them. “There you are Drac! You can’t just disappear on me like that.”
“Jak’s looking for you, by the way.” Mac said. “He went off into the Woods to try and find you.”
“So you’ve met him?” Draconorn finally smiled. “You can trust him, he’s very nice once you get to know him. Well, if he went into the Woods the first place he’ll go is Clawhold, so I’ll head him off there.” Draconorn waved goodbye, and grabbed Simba’s fur. “Oh, I forgive you for playing the game. It’s the first thing I did too. You’ll get through faster if you use the passwords in the book. There’s some that teleport you to different places, and some that get you to the next level.”
She looked at Simba. “One the count of three, we both say ‘poke squabble’. OK? One… two… three… poke squabble!”
The two of them vanished.
“Come on, we’d better go and get some lunch.” Mac tugged Bloo towards the entrance to Helm’s Creek.
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I don't think I'm involved in this story, but if I was, I'd think I would be more of an evil character rather than a good guy (Draconorn should know!)
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awmanman
   
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4/21/2007 | |
Is he MEEE?! (I hope not)
I sound like a sadistic badguy who hates his job even though hes good at it.
ITS PERFECT 
Nine times have I been told im crazy and ten times I have accepted it. |

Draconorn
    
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4/21/2007 | |
Yes, you spend the story shouting at Mac and Bloo, falling asleep at the raygun and shooting Dark creatures into teenyweeny pieces.
Grendelman, you turn up later in the story when your warp equipment goes wrong and you end up in Malurien. You're forced into the evil army, and escape later :3
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Draconorn and Simba rematerialized in the Pokemon city of Clawhold.
“Jak?” Draconorn called out, and spotted him sitting at a table in front of a café.
“Hey, Draconorn!” He waved happily then motioned for Draconorn and Simba to sit at the table. They went over to him and dragged out their chairs.
“So, what did you want to see me about?” Draconorn asked, but Jak silenced her with a look. “Aaron’s coming.” He hissed.
“Oh no.” Draconorn sighed, and looked behind her. “Hello dear.” She called out sarcastically.
Aaron stopped dead in his tracks, looked from Draconorn to Jak, and then started growling. “What’re you two talking to each other for?”
“Aaron, we’re friends. What’s wrong with that?” Draconorn said dangerously then stood up. She seemed to be getting taller, and a kind of fire seemed to blaze in her eyes.
“You’re more than just friends!” Aaron yelled, and some of the pokemon doing their shopping stopped in surprise. “You’re cheating on me! I thought it was just us.”
“WE ARE NOT!” Draconorn bellowed, using the full force of her lungs. Her wine glass shattered. “It’s you Aaron! You’re the problem! It wouldn’t work out anyway! I’m a 5000-year-old immortal; you’re just a norn! You’d die one day, and I’d end up broken hearted, too weak to go on!”
“Oh yeah?”
“You never talk to me! That’s why I talk to other guys! I still remember the time we tried to get married, and you left me at the altar!”
At that point, the crowd ‘oohed’ and many started calling out “Fight! Fight!”
Jak looked shocked, and he hastily hid the bunch of wildflowers he had picked earlier under the table.
Daxter stole Jak’s chocolate milkshake with a cackle, since nobody was paying attention to him.
Aaron growled, but then he yelled out “Queer Quit!” and vanished.
Simba sighed sadly. “I’ll go and calm him down. Queer Quit.” The lioness disappeared too.
Daxter sensed that he wasn’t needed in this situation, so he ran away into the café with Jak’s milkshake and Jak’s chips.
“Hey! You little thief!” Jak shook his fist at the ottsel, then turned to Draconorn.
“I wanted to give you these.” He held out the slightly crushed bunch of wild flowers, and Draconorn took them with a little squeak of delight.
“How did you know I preferred wild flowers to ones from a shop?”
“I didn’t, I just thought you’d like them. And wild flowers are free.”
Draconorn smiled. “Well, there is a song that says ‘the real things in life are free.’” But then she looked sad. “I’ll have to hide these from Aaron.”
“Don’t worry, he’ll find a nice norn one day.” Jak said reassuringly.
“Yeah, but how long will that be?”
“I dunno, but I don’t care either.” Jak reached for Draconorn’s hand but she moved it at that exact moment, if that was on purpose or by accident Jak couldn’t tell.
“Jak, it won’t work out. You’ve got a limited lifespan too.”
“Err… that’s what I wanted to talk to you about. Remember when you told me about the ‘slamming the laptop shut’ incident? Well, I found out it certainly fixed a few things… but you managed to fill the system full of glitches too. For example, you made a few denizens immortal.”
“Who?”
“Me, some Charizard up in Kanovar, a Chimera by the name of Ptolemy and Slug King.”
“I made you immortal? And Slug King? Oh dammit, we can’t have that old sneak living forever. I’d better go and deal with him later. But you, immortal? This is… this is, well…” Draconorn was all flustered and stuck for words.
“Great?”
“Great? It’s brilliant! We could stay in Malurien and look after it forever and ever! What other glitches are there?”
“The apples in an orchard near here fall on people’s heads on purpose, there’s a chocolate shop up North where the chocolate is made of dung and Yllamar’s restraint order has collapsed. It can do whatever it likes.”
“Yllamar’s restraint order’s gone? Oh, Sreig!!!”
Daxter, who had sneakily reappeared on Jak’s shoulder, winced at the Malurien swearword. Jak didn’t.
“We’d better go fix that.” Jak said, grabbing Draconorn’s hand. This time, she didn’t move it.
“Yeah! Ganymede!”
Draconorn vanished, and Jak drew his sword before saying “Ganymede” and vanishing too.
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(note: Malurien swearwords, sreig, faragar and hiyu. In Malurien, Barbies are Class A illegal items XD) |

awmanman
   
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4/21/2007 | |
Well sreig that! ((Major LOL))
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Draconorn
    
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4/22/2007 | |
“So we need to catch another one?”
“Yeah.”
“Do we have to?”
“Yeah”
“Aw man.”
“Well, it WAS your idea to play the game in the first place.”
“Humph”
Mac and Bloo stood just outside Helm’s Creek, arguing.
“Look! There’s one!” Bloo pointed excitedly at something red skulking near a gorse bush.
Mac and Bloo ran up to it, but they soon found it was a lot bigger than they first thought. It was a full-grown Blaziken.
“You wanna piece of me?” It growled threateningly, and Mac jumped back in surprise. “You talk!” He cried.
“Duh, pokemon aren’t stupid. You’d better let all the ones you’ve caught go after you beat Kalia.” The Blaziken suddenly kicked at Mac and sent him rolling through the grass.
Mac threw one of the pokeballs at the pokemon, but it just kicked it away. The ball flew back to its bag, empty.
“Try using that Nidoqueen we caught!” Bloo said impatiently.
Mac grabbed the Nidoqueen’s pokeball, and pressed a button on it. The Nidoqueen reappeared… right on top of Bloo.
“Mumph!” Bloo bellowed from beneath its heavy backside.
“Um…” Mac mumbled, unsure what to do, but the Nidoqueen paid no attention to him and charged at the Blaziken, flattening it.
After this the Nidoqueen went back and sat on Bloo again, leaving the rather flat Blaziken on the grass.
Mac threw another pokeball at it, and the flash of light indicated that it had been a success. “Err, could you get back in here please?” Mac held up the Nidoqueen’s pokeball and pointed at it.
The Nidoqueen raised her eyebrow and said “Next time, say ‘return’.” Before disappearing into the pokeball.
“Very debonair.” Bloo grumbled cynically, trying to un-flatten himself.
“Now we need to get to that jungle.” Mac said in a worried voice.
“We could take the train.” Bloo grinned, pointing. There was indeed a train station right beside the city.
It took only a day or two to catch all six pokemon, in a similar sort of manner to the capturing of the Blaziken. Now that they had discovered the train service and the teleporting passwords they could get to where they wanted reasonably fast.
One afternoon Mac and Bloo were lying in the sun, back in the Walker’s Woods.
“Hey, that’s a cute sparrow!” Mac pointed.
“Yeah? Well, there’s a pigeon flying past.” Bloo replied lazily.
“Hey, that pigeon has a letter!”
“It’s probably for someone else.”
The pigeon landed on a tree branch above them and started doing an odd little dance to catch their attention.
“Are you sure Bloo? It’s looking at us.”
“The letter’s for someone else! Just forget about it.”
At that, the pigeon swooped off the branch angrily and started pecking Bloo all over.
“Okay okay! The letter’s ours!”
Satisfied, the pigeon perched on Mac’s knee smugly. Mac leaned forward to take the letter, and the pigeon soared away.
“It says: Mac, Bloo, this is from Draconorn. You guys should get back here; there’s trouble. The password to get back to your world is ‘Queer Quit’. Let the pokemon you caught go, if you need them again you can ring them up on their phones (yes, pokemon have cell phones) and ask them to come back.”
“Pokemon? With phones?” Bloo giggled. Then he burst out laughing and rolled around on the ground.
Mac rolled his eyes irritably and let all the pokemon out (the Nidoqueen sat on Bloo again, instantly cutting off his giggles.)
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4/22/2007 | |
Wait, which char is supposed to be Awmanman?
Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>
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Draconorn
    
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4/23/2007 | |
Urrrr... the one called Awmanman. The robot.
(Oh, Unani Ynas has been renamed to Erebus. It's a much better name, huh?)
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There was the Blaziken, Nidoqueen, a Feraligator, a Raichu, an Absol and a Doduo. Now that Mac knew thew were smarter than they looked, he noticed things he’d never spotted before, like the fact that Nidoqueen had jewellery and make-up, Blaziken had tattoos and a belt and the Doduo had a hat on one head and head band on the other.
“I’m just going back to where I come from to talk to Draconorn, is it okay if you guys help me out again when I get back?” Mac asked, twiddling his thumbs.
“Yeah, fine.” The Blaziken grumbled, then tramped away through the trees. One by one the pokemon all left, after glancing at Mac interestedly. The last to leave was Nidoqueen, who murmured as she went “So, he’s a Mod”
“Okay Bloo? Queer Quit!”
“Back already?” Awmanman snapped, slamming his magazine shut.
“What? We’ve been away for days!” Bloo yelled shrilly.
“Malurien time’s different. You’ve been away for ten minutes of my time. Ahhhh… ten sweet, silent, blissful minutes.”
Mac and Bloo went to the back room, where the Moderators had secret meetings. Mac pushed the door open. “Sorry we’re late, we-“
His mouth fell open.
Draconorn was sitting in a chair, her face (currently that of a Bengal norn) was disfigured by a massive black eye, and her arm was in a sling.
Jak stood beside her, looking very worried. He didn’t appear to be hurt, but one of the shoulder pieces of his armour was crushed inwards and his chest armour was covered in scratches.
Daxter, perched on Jak’s shoulder like a fluffy, orange parrot, looked wide-eyed and scared.
Aaron was there too, sporting a bleeding lip, KC11 looked as though she’d had a lot of her dragon scales torn off, Bonnieshee had a few missing teeth from her dragon’s normally dazzling smile, Symia was unconscious and Sahkmet looked terrified. Spike, Leo, Awmanman, Evilspirit, Shann and Neverwinter were unhurt but looked anxious.
“Wha… what happened?” Mac asked shakily, and Bloo peeked round from behind him.
“Jak and I went to Erebus to sort out a glitch that let Yllamar run free. We weren’t expecting to find an army there. There was a huge fight and we called in some of the others to help, but we only just managed to get away.” Draconorn explained as she pressed ice to her eye.
“What would Yllmar be doing with an army?” Spike squeaked.
“Let’s see… some of the monsters we saw were Black Vouivres, Shadows, a few nasty Digimon, a black dragon and a bunch of unknowns.” Jak said thoughtfully. “Daxter, details.”
Daxter got out a little notepad and read out what was on one of the pages. “Ten roughly humanoid creatures, dressed in bullet-proof armour and uniforms, equipped with Reflex Rifles.”
Jak winked. “Daxter’s too much of a scaredy cat to fight monsters, so it’s his job to record and find out about new ones we see.”
Daxter posed proudly. “My guess is that they’re hired troopers from around Malurien.”
Leo put his hand up. “Yes, I agree with that. I’ve been hearing weird things about citizens signing up for jobs and simply… disappearing. There’s one notable occurrence, a Lombax named Ratchet, from one of the Lombax villages in Tabur Nen. He’s a famous gunner, he signed up for a mercenary job in the Malurien newspaper, got on a train and never came back.”
“Ratchet? Yeah, I’ve heard of him. He usually gets jobs as a guard at important events like the Malurympics.” Jak said, frowning anxiously.
“Look at this.” Leo flopped a newspaper onto the coffee table and opened it out. On the page was a bright, bold advertisement.
“Looking for a job as a mercenary or a gunslinger? Feel like an outcast? Can’t find anywhere you fit in? Then look no further. We offer places as area and event guards, troopers and bodyguards, and a loving family atmosphere. Contact us… blah, blah.” Leo read out.
“Suspicious. They don’t say what the company is.” Aaron rubbed his chin thoughtfully. For now, his argument with Draconorn was forgotten.
“Poor Ratchet probably signed up for it, thinking it was just an innocent company looking for a good gunner, and found himself in something quite different.” Jak shook his head. “Yllamar’s up to something, I’m sure of it.”
“Who else has disappeared?” Draconorn growled, leaning forward. She looked quite alarming with the huge purple bruise.
“A little Digimon, an Agumon, called Max, an elven gunslinger called Radora, three Ronso from the mountains in Nimbus Irium and two baby Cubones, snatched from their nest.” EvilSpirit read off from her personal organiser. “There’s lots more, but those are the most recent ones.”
“Now is the hard part.” Draconorn grimaced. “Three of us need to sneak into Erebus unnoticed-” Draconorn glared at Neverwinter on ‘unnoticed’ and Neverwinter giggled guiltily. “-to find out what Yllmar is up to, and if possible to fix that glitch. Who volunteers?”
At first, nobody put their hands up.
Then Leo boldly stuck his arm straight into the air.
“Thanks for volunteering Leo, but you’d be easily spotted with that fur of yours. Erebus is a dark place.” Draconorn said grimly and Leo crossed his arms, looking miffed.
Aaron grumbled and put his hand up, and then Bloo put up his.
“Bloo, you idiot!” Mac hissed.
“Aaron, Bloo and-“ Draconorn started, but Mac put up his hand angrily.
“Aaron, Bloo and Mac, then. Everyone else, it’s our job to help them and keep attention away from Erebus. How? I dunno, start a fire in the Heather Plains or something. Remember go undercover and be casual. That means you too, Neverwinter. No dynamite!”
“Oh man.” Neverwinter sniffled.
“Mac and Bloo, you’d better get your special equipment.” Aaron grumbled and dragged them away to a shelf.
The norn passed down two watches, bulletproof vests, armour and two pairs of sunglasses.
“What’re the sunglasses for?” Mac asked.
“Hey, you’ve got to make an impression, look cool.” Aaron said, and put on a pair of sunnies.
“And the watches?”
“They’re not watches! They’re communication devices, basically they’re walkie-talkies disguised as watches. But they do tell the time too, normal time and Malurien time.”
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RisenAngel
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4/29/2007 | |
I'm guessing I'm coming into the story soon?
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4/29/2007 | |
As soon as possible, but this topic is waaaay behind. I'm going back over the story to put you in earlier.
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Mac threw his sunnies back on the shelf, before going to a little cubicle to get changed.
When he came out in his armour (he had his own personal armour, since he was far smaller than everyone else), there was even more commotion over at the coffee table.
The mysterious door at the back for the room had opened, revealing a swirling vortex. It was a warp gate.
“Help us!” A voice shrieked, and a Moogle came running out of the warp, closely followed by a pikachu.
“What’s up?” Spike asked, crouching down to look at them.
“A group of soldiers dressed in black attacked our village.” The Moogle wailed, bursting into tears. “They took some people, and raided some of the shops. They had weird symbols on their armour and on their unit flag.”
“Pika! Mostly what they stole from the stores were Fyrnae.” The pikachu said anxiously.
“What are Fyrnae?” Mac asked.
“They’re magical substances used to create magic items, weapons and creatures. Some examples are Bottled Wind, Mediggo Flames, Dark Eco, etc.” Leo explained.
Jak seemed to tense up at the words ‘Dark Eco’. “It’s complicated stuff, sorcerers and enchanters spend years researching Fyrnae.” He growled unhappily.
“Are you alright?” Draconorn asked with a worried expression.
“I’m fine.” Jak replied with a shrug.
Aaron made a small, angry noise, as if Jak being fine was his worst nightmare.
Spike continued to calm the terrified Moogle down. “Will you take us to your village? Maybe we can catch who’s responsible.”
The Moogle shook her head, eyes widening in fear, and stuck her tiny fingers in her mouth. However, the valiant pikachu squeaked, “I will! I’ll take you to the village!”
“Come on!” Spike beckoned to the others, and followed the pikachu into the warp gate.
They all rushed in, and found themselves in a cute little village of mushroom-like houses that were so short that Jak could look into their chimneys.
Moogles and other small creatures were rushing about, squealing, and several of the mushroom houses were on fire.
At the end of the street a group of the mysterious troopers were raiding a little shop and threatening the terrified Moogle who owned it.
“Put down your weapons!” Yelled Jak’s voice from behind Mac, and the metallic click of a gun being loaded told Mac that Jak wasn’t in the mood to negotiate.
The militia looked up in surprise, but their faces couldn’t be seen because they were all wearing black helmets with tinted visors as part of their uniform.
Jak fired a warning shot just above their heads (the gun made a deep whirring rumble, then a bang like a clap of thunder. Mac thought the sound was rather disturbing) and the burning remains of the shop exploded in a flash of lightning.
“Yeah! Feel the wrath of my Storm Rifle!” Jak whooped and levelled the Rifle again.
The band of soldiers decided that they really didn’t want to mess with Jak, and scarpered with the prisoners and loot they had collected.
One lone gunner held back for a moment on top of the hill, silhouetted against the setting sun and looking back on the carnage. Then he left along with the rest of the troupe.
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I'll put you in the next part.
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4/29/2007 | |
Hmm. I dun wanna be a dragon... I want to be my norn self. Aren't all of us mods shape-shifters?
Lol, me and my complaining. And yes, I would like some cheese with that whine.
X3 Drac, this stuff is awesome and inspiring for me, I want to grow up to be just like you. XD
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Draconorn
    
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4/30/2007 | |
You do shapeshift, but most of the time I don't mention your forms so the reader can make it up for themselves.
You should concentrate on growing up to be like yourself, especially since I'm only a year older than you XD |
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Anyway, my forms are mostly grendel/enigma.
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5/5/2007 | |
I made a DIMENSION splash image, I found this awesome picture on Photobucket and modified it to make it more Malurien-ish
It's not finished quite yet, but I hope you like it anyway:
DIMENSION1
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Grendelman sat at his computer equipment, munching a cheese sandwich. He was bored, so he decided on a course of action.
“I’ll go visit Draconorn and her norns.” He announced to the air then entered the co-ordinates to Imperial Albia. There was a flash of light and…
He materialized somewhere that was definitely NOT Imperial Albia.
He was in a marshy clearing, surrounded by a platoon of soldiers in black. They were shocked at first but then one, perhaps the captain, pointed a lethal looking weapon at Grendelman and said “Otherworlder! You are now our captive. You will be brought before Yllamar.”
Grendelman gulped as the soldiers shoved him roughly to his feet. Worse still, he had left his sandwich behind.
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“Yo! Tidus!” Wakka’s loud voice cut through the grogginess clouding Tidus’ mind.
“Wha?” Tidus snapped his head up and looked around. Tidus, Wakka and Yuna were sitting at a table in front of a cheery café in a sunny beachside town.
“Falling asleep? It isn’t THAT hot.” Wakka laughed, his brown face cracking into his characteristic grin. “Read this!” He thrust a newspaper at Tidus.
Tidus picked up the newspaper and flipped it open as he stuck the fingers of his other hand in his spiky blonde hair and gave it a good scratch.
“Innocent Moogle Village Raided! Carnage in Walker’s Woods.
Yesterday evening a small village of Moogles was attacked by a mysterious band of gunners and swordsmen, whose insignia is unknown. Three Moogles were taken prisoner and the village shops were emptied of all Fyrnae. The reasons for this attack are unknown, but a group of Moderators came to the rescue of the petrified village populace. One Moogle reported that a famous bounty hunter by the name of Jak scared away the invaders with a single gunshot.
Draconorn commented: ‘we think it has something to do with Yllamar, there’s been a glitch and its restraint order has broken down. Be alert for suspicious activity at all times, and report any attacks, viruses or Dark creatures to the nearest Moderator.’” Tidus read out, shocked. “Yllamar? How does this have anything to do with it?”
Wakka leaned back in his chair thoughtfully as Yuna snatched the newspaper out of Tidus’ hands to read it. “There been some funny going ons in the North lately. Erebus is up North, no?”
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Mac, Bloo and Aaron went into the warp gate, fully prepared for the dangerous task ahead, while the others went about their usual jobs.
Awmanman went back to manning the Warp ray in the central room, Evilspirit managed the front counter and Bonnieshee constantly went in and out of the warp, carrying messages around to the various Mods and important citizens in Malurien.
Mac found himself in the Moogle village of the raid, since the gate was still programmed to that location. The Moogles has already set about repairing the village, with help from other creatures.
Mac watched a large pikachu lift up a new door lintel and hammer it in place.
The repairs were swift, since the houses were made of nothing more than bamboo and thatching for the walls and carved wood for the roof. The buildings may be rather flimsy, but the plus side was that whenever disaster struck the town could quickly recuperate.
A Moogle on the roof of a new house, painting the red-and-white-spots mushroom theme onto the wood, waved at Aaron, Mac and Bloo cheerily.
While most of the Moogles were busy working, a small knot of the little creatures stood at the roadside, looking lost.
“What’s wrong?” Mac asked them, but a small norn from a nearby village answered, while the Moogles just continued to stare into space.
“They’re grieving for the Moogles taken captive, sir.” The norn said.
“What would Yllamar want with three Moogles?” Bloo asked with a small snigger.
“Moogles are naturally very good engineers. The best machines and robots in Malurien are built by a team of Moogles.” Aaron replied.
“Hey, how do you know all this?” Bloo asked hotly.
“I read all of Draconorn’s notes while she wasn’t looking.” Aaron shrugged indifferently.
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Does Bowser show up? He shows pretty frequently in the RPG...
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(I updated the promo image, I'm pretty sure it's finished now. And don't worry, the psychotic civet norn on the right is a friendlie, it may look like it's chasing after Daxter but it's a good norn)
I think Bowser could be an army General. Hee hee *imagines Koopa king with lots of medals X3*
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“So, how can we get to where we’re going fast?” Mac asked. “I don’t fancy walking all the way.”
“We could hire a zoomer, but if you crash on one they explode like a stick of dynamite. No, I’d much rather get a horse or chocobo.” Aaron replied.
“Chocobo?”
“Big yellow birds, they’re a lot faster then horses but harder to feed because they don’t eat grass.”
They walked out of Moogleville and onto the Highroad, the main road that runs from the bottom of Elysium right to the top. It was a short walk from Moogleville to the next village, which was populated by norns.
“What happened in Moogleville?” Asked a tall Dale norn, looking concerned. “The newspaper deliverer missed out Daletown today, for some reason.”
“They got attacked by a mysterious unregistered band of soldiers. No one knows their symbol, so they’re clearly not registered with the Malurien Database.” Aaron explained.
The Dale norn looked sad, and he set off up the road to see if he could help.
“I like Malurien.” Mac said. “There’s all sorts of different creatures and races, but they all work together as a team.”
“Yeah, but not quite. There are evil creatures here, take Yllamar for example.” Aaron grunted, clearly in a bad mood.
Aaron went to a sales stable to buy some horses while Mac and Bloo went to a shop to buy lunch.
While the two were munching on the local delicacy, gourmet burgers with unleavened bread and filled with some mysterious meat and weird Malurien cheese, Aaron came up to them, leading three horses. One was a black mare, with a white face and white ‘socks’ round the hooves; one was a reddish chestnut stallion and one was a cute, brown and white skewbald.
Aaron picked the stallion, Mac chose the mare and Bloo was left with the skewbald pony, though he didn’t mind.
They mounted their steeds (Bloo very awkwardly, since he had no legs. In the end, he had to ride sidesaddle) and they galloped away to Clawhold.
They didn’t manage to get there in one day’s worth of riding, so they pitched camp in a nice grassy spot next to the roadside.
At about eleven in the evening Mac was lying awake, looking at the strange Malurien stars. Instead of familiar American constellations like Orion and Ursa Major, there were bright, rainbow coloured stars scattered about in clouds of colour. Aaron had told him about a few constellations, like the Dragon, the Chimera and the Three-Headed Arcanine, but Mac was having difficulty in finding any.
Bloo was snoring loudly a short distance away, but Mac knew that Aaron was still awake.
The silence was perfect, until… “Move!” Aaron shook Mac roughly, then moved on to Bloo. “Hide in the bushes! Don’t bother about hiding our stuff.”
Mac crawled into a bush groggily, but when he looked back at the moonlit road he suddenly felt wide-awake, staring at what was going on.
Someone was riding past at a trot, a tall rider in black armour and cloak riding on a black horse. No, not a horse, a black unicorn.
Bloo made a gasp, and the rider skidded to a stop. He looked around warily for a second, and then decided it was nothing and rode on.
“Strange” Aaron muttered. “Very strange.” Then he perked up.
“Write a letter to Jak! He needs to know about this, so he can keep tabs on that rider. I’ll call a carrier pigeon.”
Mac jumped out of his bush and ran to his bag to get pen and paper, while Aaron made a funny warbling whistle. Mac only just managed to scribble the letter before a plump grey pigeon fluttered down from the sky.
Mac folded up the piece of paper and gave it to the pigeon.
The pigeon clamped the letter in its beak, winked and soared away.
A pigeon landing on Jak’s head startled him. He was patrolling the streets of a city called Ebonseire. “You could have cooed rather than doing that!” Jak barked crossly and took the letter.
Daxter shooed the bird away as Jak unfolded the rather dirty and creased paper.
“Jak, there’s been something really suspicious near Daletown. We saw a rider dressed in black armour and on a black unicorn riding past at night; we only just managed to hide.
Mac”
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Oh, you know what Moogles are right? Little rabbit-like people with purple wings and pompoms on their heads. From Final Fantasy.
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There's a Moogle race for Morrowind, and a 'Jenova's Child' race too.
I don't think I'm capable of being a messanger girl, my Dyslexia makes me mix words and names and such. That and I'm lazy and I have bad memory... Heh... heh...
Does Contra ever appear? She's too cool to leave out! TOO COOL! I mean really-she's been hanging around Jak (in the RPG) for almost an entire Page now! How can you leave poor Queen Contra out of your awsh book? AWSH.
Book...
*Goes into a manic high*
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Story, not book. But it's not far off 
Sure, I can add Contra in. Heck, I'll be adding A LOT of RPG chars in. Well, I need them for the big battle.
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Jak read the note, thinking how messy Mac’s writing was. It was probably written in a hurry.
Daxter whimpered. “Let’s just forget about it, maybe it was just someone who really likes black?”
“Daxter, he was riding a black unicorn. Those creatures are evil.” Jak scolded the ottsel. “Draconorn! Come here.”
Draconorn ran over from further up the street. “I’m glad I packed Aaron off on that mission, he was a useless partner. What’s up?”
Jak gave her the note. “We’d better get over there, that rider might have been a spy. Those three could be in danger.”
Draconorn nodded, burning the note with a lighter to make sure spies wouldn’t find it, but then she went grey. “The zoomer?”
Jak laughed and walked up to Draconorn. “Nope, no zoomer today. I’m going to show you something.” He walked up to an old abandoned warehouse.
Draconorn followed, interested.
With a big grin Jak kicked in the rotten warehouse door and went inside. Draconorn gasped delightedly.
A sleek, shiny black racing car was parked inside, clearly of the kind designed for power and speed.
“A first class racing car!” Draconorn squealed, and began to examine it. “Falcon chassis, Grinder engine v8, and just look at that turbo outlet!”
Jak was taken by surprise. “You’re into cars?”
“Yeah! I used to have a Fire Hawk back in Imperial Albia, remember those?”
“Well, this is my Road Blade. It’s one of the best cars around. I have others, hidden all around Malurien. I use them if the zoomer is a bit unconventional.”
Draconorn smiled. “Well, let’s ride!”
Jak jumped into the driver’s seat, Daxter riding on his shoulder, and Draconorn perched on the back of the car behind him. She put her arms around his waist to make sure she didn’t fall off.
Jak liked that.
“OK, don’t scratch the paintwork. It took me a week to get it to that sheen.” He slammed his foot down and they roared out of the warehouse and up the street. People screamed and jumped out of the way, then shook their fists after Jak, Daxter and Draconorn had screamed past.
Draconorn was laughing in delight, but Jak could only just hear her over the wind. He smiled.
“Jak, how did you find out about your ‘immortality glitch’?”
“Well, I kinda noticed that I haven’t needed to shave for months. It’s one of those manly things.”
“What about Daxter?”
“Same thing. He hasn’t clipped his claws in ages.”
Draconorn went silent, thinking.
“Draconorn?”
“Yeah?”
“Could you take me to Imperial Albia one day? Just for a trip. It’d be nice to go somewhere different.”
Draconorn was surprised at first, but then she smiled. She snuggled up closer (Jak liked that even more) and replied. “Sure, if I can get the warp to work. It will one day.”
Jak nodded his head and it wasn’t long before he slammed down on the brakes. The Road Blade skidded sideways to a stop with a satisfying shriek, right in Daletown. Bright blue Dale norns stopped and looked at Jak, confused.
One, who clearly knew Jak, yelled out “I haven’t seen you use that thing for a while, what’s the emergency?”
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*Sigh* It's like some kind of cheesy Fanfic.
And master chief gazed into her eyes, lovingly.
Or:
Vash embraced *insert name of Fangirl here* lovingly.
Or the worst kind of all...
And Ash kissed *fangirl* passionatly.
XD Tee-hee. I don't read those kinds of Fanfics. And thankfully all of the Creatures fanfiction doesn't have all that 'passionate' stuff.
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Huh? What you talking about?
In case you didn't notice, they're also roaring around the countryside in racing cars, and you've written stories about norns smooching before XD |

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What? Which story was that?
And what I'm saying is...
Well, ehn... I dunno. So uncanon. Canonal? Uncanony? Bleck. Can't think on an empty stomach.
Or couch.
Anyway, this is what I'm talking about...
"She put her arms around his waist to make sure she didn’t fall off.
Jak liked that."
And,
"“Could you take me to Imperial Albia one day? Just for a trip. It’d be nice to go somewhere different.”
Draconorn was surprised at first, but then she smiled. She snuggled up closer (Jak liked that even more) and replied. “Sure, if I can get the warp to work. It will one day.”"
Heh, don't worry about it, Drac.I'm just teasin', no biggie! X3
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If you think THAT was bad, it gets even worse! Muahaha!
Go tease someone else, Beatfreak or MCF maybe XD
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Aaron, Mac and Bloo sneaked through the Jungle of Defiance (“It has that name for a reason,” Aaron muttered as they went. “It’s the most monster-infested part of Elysium”) that day, but the going was slow because Mac and Bloo weren’t used to jungles. They kept tripping over roots and bushes.
They had to keep themselves well hidden, because there were plenty of creatures stalking about that could be potential spies. To hide Bloo’s brilliant blue, Mac had pushed him in a puddle of mud.
They had just managed to dart across a clearing and back into the relative safety of the trees when Mac felt something furry brush his leg. Mac started kicking and waving his arms around, terrified, but he heard Daxter hiss “Calm down! It’s just us!”
“Daxter, you made me jump!” Mac grumbled.
Jak walked up to them with a frown. “That rider was a knight, the Dale norns told us. He’s been going into artefact shops and demanding that the owners hand over all their Fyrnae. Of course, the unfortunate victims did as they were told since they were at sword point. That means that Yllamar is creating vast amounts of magical items and creatures and has already used up all the natural resources in Erebus.”
“Also, the others have been looking around and noticed that raiders in different areas take different items. In Walker’s Woods, for instance, food is stolen. In the Shimmering Desert, in Tabur Nen, money and jewels are taken. Whoever plans the attacks clearly knows where to get the best supplies. That means that we’re not dealing with your average crime lord. This is a full scale assault.” Draconorn’s voice came out of nowhere.
“Drac? Where are you?” Mac asked, puzzled.
“I’m right here! Honestly, sometimes I feel like I’m invisible.”
Mac carefully looked around, and noticed a rather knobbly patch of bark on a tree. On closer inspection, it was clearly a chameleon.
“How can you expect us to see you if you’ve taken on the shape of a CHAMELEON?” Bloo snapped heatedly.
“What?” The lizard searched itself. “Oh, whoops. Sorry about that.”
The chameleon changed into the silver-haired elf again, and Draconorn jumped to the ground sheepishly.
Jak laughed. “Forgetting your own form? That’s not normal.”
Aaron butted in impatiently. “Quit messing around! We need to get on our way to the north.”
Draconorn gave him an evil, baleful glare and stalked away with Jak.
“Hey! Wait for me!” Daxter shouted in anguish and pattered off after them.
Aaron ‘hmphed’ angrily and led the way through the jungle.
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“We’ve had enough of these raiders taking our food and our people!” Someone shouted.
A crowd had gathered around a platform in the middle of a town. Several figures stood on the platform.
One was Sonic the hedgehog, hands on hips and grinning down at the crowd. Standing next to Sonic was a small purple dragon, Spyro, with Sparx the dragonfly hovering above him.
Behind them both was a tall Ronso, his wild silver hair brushed out of his blue lion face, his single forehead horn broken. Kimahri Ronso.
“Calm down! We’re gonna sort them troopers out!” Sonic said. “We’ll make an army of our own, an army of the People, a revolution!”
Spyro muttered out of the corner of his mouth to Sonic “I don’t think this will work, those soldiers are clearly well-trained. What can we do?”
“Shut up!” Sonic snapped. “It will work!” Then he turned to address the eager crowd again. “When we’re through with those kidnappers and thieves they’ll wish they’d never been born!” He jeered
“Yeah!” The crowd screamed in reply, waving pitchforks and guns.
“What are we gonna do?”
“Smash them!”
“I can’t hear you!” Sonic leaned forward and put a hand up to his ear, but then a deep, strong voice made him and Spyro jump nearly out of their skins.
“Kimahri think we should go see Hands. Jak and the others know how to fight, Kimahri knows they will tell us what to do.” Kimahri said, crossing his arms and staring at the other two fiercely with his amber eyes.
“Kimahri? You haven’t talked for weeks!” Spyro cried in shock.
“Kimahri not like to talk, Kimahri say thinking is more important.”
Sonic sighed. “Fine, we’ll go find the Mods. But I’m telling you this now, it won’t do any good.”
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When does Bowser appear?
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I put him in the story, but you guys won't be reading it 'til way later. I've written A LOT more than what's posted here in the topic.
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Bonnieshee sat on the roof a house, keeping watch over the street.
She was thinking, too. Jak and Draconorn had been hanging out a lot lately, while Drac and Aaron had started completely ignoring each other.
“What could it all mean?” Bonnieshee said aloud, pummelling her head with her fist out of sheer frustration. Then the realisation came to her, as if a firefly had flown in her ear and lit up the inside of her skull.
“Jak and Drac don’t like each other, do they? You know, like like?” She asked herself thoughtfully.
“Eh, what you sayin’?” An old norn on the street below put a paw to his ear and looked up at her, while fiddling with his walking stick with the other hand.
“Never mind.” Bonnieshee called down loudly, then lay back on the roof to stare at the clouds.
“Oi! Shee! You’re supposed to be watching the criminals, not watching the clouds.” Evilspirit suddenly thumped down onto the roof from the sky, making Bonnieshee sit bolt upright in surprise.
“Oh, hi Evilspirit.” Bonnieshee grinned, lying back down again. “I’m taking a much needed break, that’s what.”
“Yeah, good idea. I’ve been flying all morning.” Evilspirit flopped down too. “I can tell you’re thinking, from that funny frown on your face. What are you puzzling over in that tiny little brain of yours?”
“I’m thinking about Jak and Draconorn, and what Aaron’s up to.” Bonnieshee replied. “Guess what? I caught Aaron flirting with a girl norn the other day! He’s been accusing Drac wrong all along; it was him cheating on her. “
Evilspirit stared at her in surprise. “You serious? Well, at least we can stop him from pestering Draconorn now, so she and Jak can get a bit of peace.”
Aaron started up a campfire and pitched the tents, all by himself without uttering a single word. He stormed past Mac and Bloo with an armful of firewood, and flung the sticks liberally onto the flames.
“Um, are you OK?” Bloo asked anxiously, watching Aaron begin to sharpen his arrowheads a little too violently, chipping the metal away.
Aaron flung the arrows and sharpening stone down angrily.
“Of course not! Draconorn gets mad at me so much now, she nearly threw me out of a two storey window once.” He snapped, huddling up like a wounded animal.
“Well, I’m not surprised.” Mac stated bluntly. “You mistreat her.”
Aaron sighed. “I guess I do. There’s this other norn I met in Daletown, and I’ve been talking to her a lot. I really like her, but I also feel I’m backstabbing Draconorn. It makes me confused, and then that in turn makes me snappy. I don’t know what to do, but I know that I don’t love Draconorn the way I used to. It’s just not working for me.”
“Then tell her, and save yourself a lot of trouble.” Mac sat down in front of the fire. “You’d be a lot better off with that norn, and Draconorn would be a lot better off with J… I mean, with someone else.” Mac babbled, knowing he’d almost let something bad slip out. Draconorn would be after his blood if he’d said something like that to Aaron.
Aaron raised his eyebrows at Mac but said nothing. He shrugged. “I’ll think about it. Goodnight.”
Then he slipped off to his sleeping bag.
Bloo opened a bag of marshmallows, skewered one and started toasting it over the fire. “You know what, Mac? Love is crazy.”
Mac laughed. “I agree; it’s just not something an eight-year-old and his imaginary friend can understand.”
Bloo nodded fervently.
“Bloo, you’re cremating your marshmallow.”
“Noooooo!” Bloo screeched and jumped away from the fire. The marshmallow was now a gungy, burning inferno on the end of his stick. The marshmallow drooped pitifully, then plopped onto the grass as a twisted black lump.
Frustrated, Bloo fetched another marshmallow and started the process all over again. Since he kept getting distracted, it took three more attempts to get a nicely toasted marshmallow rather than a burnt mess.
Mac joined in, and managed to get each marshmallow perfectly done. “Bloo, there’s a kind of finesse and style about marshmallow toasting. It’s an art.” Mac announced and popped another faultless result into his mouth as Bloo set fire to his entire stick.
Giving up, Bloo packed away the bag and went to bed.
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"“I can tell you’re thinking, from that funny frown on your face. What are you puzzling over in that tiny little brain of yours?”"
Hey! First of all, when I'm thinking about other's relationships I NEVER frown. And I won't tolerate a comment like that, not even from friends! XD Okay, maybe from friends, but I'd 'jokingly' chuck them over the edge of a cliff.
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XD XD XD The DIMENSION you and Evilspirit tease each other. |

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Meep? Can Bowtruckle come in this, too? And maybe Moonshadow? *drools*
ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy |

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The thing is I'm not as good friends with ES as, say, you, Grendel Man, or KC11...
But I want to be super-awesome-buddies with everyone...
Demension BonnieShee: *Pokes*
Me: <_<
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5/31/2007 | |
How many more characters do I need to add in? There's already about fifty. 
I'll add them in if you like ES, but you'll have to tell me who they are first XD
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The next day was one of hard out riding.
They had to get from the jungle to the western edge of Tabur Nen, which was something Mac was excited about. So far he had only seen the forests and grassland of Elysium and was eager to see the Shimmering Desert.
“Honestly Mac, it’s not that brilliant.” Aaron grinned, much happier after the confession around the campfire. “It’s just a big expanse of sand, even though the sand is rather sparkly.”
Bloo plodded along on his pony, watching the countryside go past.
Suddenly, he screamed and patted the pony into full speed.
Mac’s horse swerved as the chubby little skewbald galloped past.
“What the?”
Roar!
A big… something… burst out of the tangled foliage on their left.
“It’s a Dark Clannfear!” Aaron lifted his bow and notched an arrow to the string.
The creature was like a lizard, thin and muscly, with powerful forelegs and skinny front legs. It had a triceratops-like head and red eyes, and it’s scales were a glossy blue-black rather than the green of a normal Clannfear.
Aaron fired an arrow at the beast and it lunged at him in retaliation, knocking the norn of his horse. The horse, being a very well trained one, reared and knocked the Clannfear back with its feet.
Mac rode towards the Clannfear, feeling brave, and smacked it over the head with his truncheon. The Clannfear toppled forwards, knocked out cold.
Aaron looked miffed. “Beginner’s luck.” He grumbled. He mounted his stallion and shot an arrow right into the creature’s eye to make sure it was dead.
Mac rode up to Bloo to calm him down. “Bloo, it’s OK! The thing’s dead.”
Aaron trotted past them. “Your first fight? Now be prepared for more.” He smirked wickedly, keeping his bow out and directing the horse with his knees rather than the reigns.
Jak checked a scratched tree, looking at the shape of the gouges to see if he could identify what had made them.
Draconorn was elsewhere, sorting out a fight between two kids playing the game, something about who’s pokemon were ‘cooler’. Jak shook his head irritably. When would these people learn that pokemon were highly intelligent creatures?
Footsteps and a rustling sound alerted Jak to danger and he threw himself into the dense bushes, grabbing Daxter as he went.
Inching forward quietly, Jak and Daxter peeked out between the leaves to see what was going on.
One of Yllamar’s soldiers was standing alone in the nearby clearing. He was of medium height, with rather wide, flat boots and what appeared to be furry ears poking out of slots in the helmet.
What would a lone troop be doing here? Jak thought suspiciously.
Without warning, the gunner reached up to his helmet and pulled it off, revealing…
“Man, that’s stuffy!” Ratchet the missing Lombax cried in relief, tossing the helmet aside and beginning to undo the straps of the rest of the armour. Shiny black pauldrons, chest armour, bracers and thigh armour were thrown carelessly aside.
Ratchet stretched, now wearing a black singlet, grey jeans, gloves, boots and his dog tag, and said “Clank, I think it’s safe.”
What Jak took to be was a metal gadget backpack suddenly jumped away from the Lombax, revealing that it was truly a robot. “Being a backpack is boring.” The robot called Clank complained.
Jak ignored the little robot and looked closer at Ratchet. There was a hardened, gaunt look about him that said all too clearly that he had been treated harshly, and a strange tattoo was burned onto his right cheek.
Just as Ratchet went to pick up his gun, Jak jumped up and shouted, “Don’t move!” He pointed his Storm Rifle at the Lombax and Daxter grinned nastily.
Ratchet put his hands up with scared expression and Clank hid behind him.
“What’s your business here?” Jak demanded coldly.
“Please, don’t shoot me! I only just escaped.” Ratchet pleaded, wringing his gloved hands.
“Escaped?” Jak asked, but kept the Rifle aimed at Ratchet’s forehead.
Ratchet nodded, eyes wide, and said “I was forced into the army. I signed up for this job, got on a train and when I got to my stop this Black knight had me at sword point. He said that if I didn’t join the army, he’d kill me right there. I got put in a squad full of people who actually wanted to be there, I was only one thinking of escaping. I only just got away.”
Jak nodded and lowered the gun. “So, there’ll be a squad near here.”
He got out a phone and dialled Draconorn’s number. “Drac? We have a problem. I’ve found Ratchet, the Lombax mechanic who went missing, but his squad is still hanging around. I’m near Silverpeaks, okay? Yeah, I’ll see you soon. Bye.”
“Was that Draconorn?” Ratchet asked, awed.
“What of it?” Jak asked frostily, tucking the phone back into his belt bag.
Ratchet threw himself at Jak’s feet, which surprised Jak and made him fall over. “Please! You must take me to Draconorn! I can help you fight back against Yllamar.”
“Alright, alright!” Jak got up and brushed himself off furiously.
Ratchet looked relieved.
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Sorry about the double post, but DIMENSION can now be read on my website, fully illustrated!
I'll post a link later.
EDIT: Here we go :3
DIMENSION, part one |
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6/12/2007 | |
I read the one on the site.
Me ebil. ![[evil] [evil]](/images/smilies/evil.gif)
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6/14/2007 | |
Sorry that the pictures aren't there, but in being transferred from my PC to the net they vanished.
But that's OK, I'm drawing new ones anyway XD
Yes, you are very evil. I was trying to connect DIMENSION to your story a bit more :3 |
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While drawing me:
The form I should be in looks like a blue, scaleless banshee grendel with a ridge of straight spines going down the center of his back.
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