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Draconorn

Draconorn
New Zealand  


  2/15/2007

(I hope it's okay writing the title like that but that's how the story title is written. Well, it's actually D-I-M-E-N-S-I-O-N)
It's a story about norns and their hands (lots of people here will be in it ;)) who get sucked through the warp into the world of Foster's home for Imaginary Friends.
The Foster's are going bankrupt, so all the hands programme a real/virtual game/world.
There's characters in the world from all sorts of TV shows, from Naruto through pokemon and many others.
The future villain goes haywire and takes control of the virtual/real world, and tries to take over Earth and other worlds too.
I'm posting the story later, but I just want people's opinions right now. Anyone who wants the full story, because a shortened and picture less version will be posted here, pm me and I'll email it to you.

 
KC11

KC11


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  2/15/2007

o.O

Sounds.... interesting.

Definatly post it!


Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
xan

xan



  2/15/2007

epic crossover please post asap!!!
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  2/16/2007

OK, here goes:

Pronunciation:
Draconorn: DRAH-KOAH-NORN
Yllamar: EYE-ELL-AH-MARE

Malurien: MAL-OOR-EE-AN
Elysium: EL-EE-ZEE-UM
Kanovar: KAN-OH-VARE
Nimbus Irium: NIM-BUS EYE-REE-UM
Aqualantis: ACK-WA-LAN-TIS
Mortmarium: MURTH-MARE-EE-UM
Tabur Nen: TAY-BUR-NEN
Unani Ynas: YOU-NAN-EYE IN-AS

Prologue - How they got from here to there, part one

It had been one party to remember.
The Hand, Draconorn was now removing bright streamers from the trees, picking up paper cups and putting out lanterns hanging from the branches of rose bushes. She had taken on the form of a small dragon on its back legs, with blue scales.
“Oi! Beatfreak, Aaron! Give me a hand won’t you?” She called out to two figures having a heated discussion in the darkening shade. One was a Hand from another world; the other was a tall, handsome half norn with grendel arms, legs and tail
“Sure thing Drac.” Beatfreak, currently in the form of a norn with skewbald fur and frizzy hair, strolled over and ripped a bunch of streamers out of a tree rather hard, accidentally pulling the entire branch down.
Aaron doused the blue and white lamps in the bush he was standing next to, then picked up a broom and began sweeping the party debris. Symia had left a great mound of banana peels before she departed through the warp, and Awmanman hadn’t hesitated to vaporise various objects into a fine coating of ash on the grass, since that was his idea of ‘fun’.
The famous nornband Electronornz Halo was lounging around after spending the day livening up the party with their music.
“Okay, I think that’ll do for tonight. We’ll clear up the rest tomorrow.” Draconorn put aside her broom and unpacked a bunch of hammocks. She tied them up in the trees to provide places for her friends to sleep. The sun had already vanished below the horizon, leaving the air steely cold.
“I’ll kip in this one.” Spike the Bengal norn yawned, wandering into the clearing from a game of volleyball with Leo and pointing at a hammock nearby.
Draconorn had already curled up on hers and fallen asleep.
Little did they all know that the warp had already decided their fate.
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Like I said, if you want the illustrated version just ask.

 
Wup

Wup



  2/16/2007

O.O.....That's a TOTALLY awesome storyline! Say, could I be in it at some point?

ps. I haven't played Monster Raannnrrrnnchhdoggy
 
awmanman

awmanman



  2/16/2007

That would be interesting to have some internet being crossed into this mubxel (Mix and jumble).

Nine times have I been told im crazy and ten times I have accepted it.
 
KC11

KC11


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  2/16/2007

Can I be in it too? The story is awsome!

Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  2/17/2007

You're all in it anyway, I've already written about 10 a4 pages.

Prologue part 2
“Is this it?” Bloo grumbled, poking at his thin potato soup irritably. He was a small blue blob of an imaginary friend, witty and perhaps rather self-centred.
“Bloo, you know that the Foster’s is running short on funds. It’s getting really hard to feed us all.” Mac snapped, explaining this for the umpteenth time to his friend. He was, however, prodding his soup in an unsatisfied way too.
The others said nothing. They had all either devoured the watery soup in a hunger rush, or spent the last ten minutes glaring at it balefully.
“Oh man, it’s going to rain.” Piped up a small imaginary friend sadly, watching dark, boiling clouds roll in from the horizon.
“Wait, they’re moving too fast.” Mac said, surprised. He hopped down off his chair and rushed outside, out of the mansion that was a home to lost imaginary friends.
The sky was now entirely covered in angry black clouds, but the strangest thing of all was that a light seemed to be shining out of the heart of the biggest one.
Everyone else had followed, and someone shrieked.
The cause of shock was that the clouds had parted where the light was coming from to reveal a swirling blue vortex that was closing rapidly.
It spat some indistinct objects into the sky before vanishing, and the figures plummeted to the ground.
Seconds later, they hit the earth with a terrible crunch. One of them, who happened to be a fast asleep Draconorn, tumbled head over heels and landed unconscious, battered and bleeding at the feet of the crowd.
Beatfreak lay still and almost lifeless a few metres away, Aaron dangled from the branches of the tree where he landed, Spike and Leo were heaped on top of each other a distance away and the unfortunate Electronornz Halo had all been scattered in a shallow but muddy pond.
“What are they?” Bloo whispered, shocked and scared, as he stared at Draconorn’s dragon face.
Draconorn groaned and her eyelids flickered. “Spike, Aaron, Leo, are you guys all right?” She mumbled, her voice slurred. She staggered to her feet and looked at the crowd before her, cross-eyed. “What? Where am I?” Draconorn realised she was no longer in Imperial Albia, and began panicking. She screamed
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Savverz

Savverz


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  2/22/2007

Hey, this is pretty awesome! My brothers watch Foster's Home For Imaginery Friends and I've played lots of Pokemon games, and I USED to watch the Anime.

Ehn! When do I come in? :3 Nah, ignore my whining, I just want to be in this awesome story.


Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  2/23/2007

You come in pretty soon, don't worry.

Chapter One- A Big Project

It took a long time to calm everyone down, wake up the unconscious and explain why on earth the strange group had just dropped out of the clouds, although they didn’t know how themselves.
“What are you weird things?” Beatfreak asked as all the imaginary friends in the Foster’s crowded round to get a closer look. (Some had tentacles, slime, etc)
Bloo started a coughing fit that sounded oddly like “Us, weird? Just take a look at yourselves.”
“We’re imaginary friends.” Said Eduardo, a big, strong, purple creature with horns, massive teeth and a skull belt, but he was really very cowardly. He was often described as a ‘purple, hairy ogre’.
Aaron, who had been rescued from the tree, was talking to Leo in a low voice, shooting glances at the queer creatures crowding round Beatfreak and Draconorn.
Draconorn yawned. “I think I need a change, this form’s boring now.” She muttered, and shape shifted into a pretty elf with gold armour, silver-white hair and amber eyes. Eduardo screamed and collapsed in a dead faint.
“What? WHAT?” Draconorn asked, confused, as the crowd gasped.
“Well, we don’t find people who can change their looks if they get bored very often, do we?” Mac said, in an awed voice.
“Seems ordinary to me.” Draconorn shrugged.
Bloo was positively exited by this, rather than shocked like everyone else. “Ooh! Do it again! Turn into me! Me!”
Draconorn sighed, and transformed into an exact copy of Bloo, before reverting to the silver haired elf again, causing Bloo to clap and Eduardo to faint again.
Lu, Spark, Nisha, Max and Koda were lounging around with nothing to do.
“Drac, can you send us back now? We’re supposed to be on tour in Lanodren right now.” Nisha complained.
“I can’t control the warp! At least, not without my laptop.” Draconorn snapped indignantly. “If you’re bored, play us some music! Set up on the side of the street, get a bit of fame outside of Imperial Albia.”
“Sounds good to me.” Lu agreed, unpacking her drums.
“Me too!” Koda squealed.
Spark already had his guitar out, and plugged it in to his portable battery and amplifier. (How they managed to bring their stuff with them through the warp, nobody knows)
At that, they stuck up one of their hit songs, Reboot.

“One, two three four
Reboot reboot
Get to the floor
Take one step left and one step right
You’d better get ready cuz we’ll party all night
Hey!…”

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/1/2007

:3 Weee.

This is just getting better and better.


Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/3/2007

OK, you guys will be turning up in the next installment, stay tuned!
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Spike, who had broken his leg and was propped up against the wall of the mansion, clapped in time to the beat. He always had loved the band’s music, as he had met them before their superstar days, lost in a lonely jungle with Aaron and Leo and running away from vampires.
Mr. Herriman, the giant rabbit in a tuxedo and top hat who ran the Foster’s Home for Imaginary Friends, was whispering urgently to Madam Foster, the elderly woman who had created him and the mansion. “Well, they are aliens… they could attract a lot of paying people, we might not go bankrupt after all.”
Madam Foster smacked the rabbit on the nose with her walking stick, knocking out his monocle. “They are living, thinking creatures! We can’t lock them in cages like a zoo!”
Draconorn heard this and stalked over. “Lock me in a cage and I’ll bite your head off.” She growled, and Madam Foster laughed. “Seriously though, shutting us up won’t save this orphanage thingy.” Draconorn continued, waving her hand at the mansion. “I can help you, if you give us somewhere to stay until I can get a warp flux back to my home.”
“How?” Asked Mr. Herriman suspiciously, cowed by Draconorn’s threat to decapitate him.
“People of the modern age like games, right? Well, how about we use the warp and a bit of… magic… to make a sort of real virtual role-playing game?” Draconorn said quietly. The other two seemed to be listening intently, and Mac sidled over saying “Did someone say game?”
“Sounds like a good idea.” Madam Foster leaned on her walking stick and looked thoughtful. “But, how?”
“I’d need a lot of help from all my friends, shape shifters like me. It’ll take a lot of CAOS coding, and we’ll need to find a spot in virtual reality, but I reckon I could create a world of our own, a game.” Draconorn rubbed her chin.
“Excellent! Well, get started then.” Mr. Herriman beamed and loped away to tell off Cheese for trying to attack Leo with a roll of toilet paper.
“A real world game! Coooooooooool! When, where, why?” Mac stared getting hyped up and jumped and down.
“I’ve been wanting to do this for ages.” Draconorn took off her rucksack and rummaged through it. “If only I had my… oh gosh, I’VE GOT IT!” She leapt into the air, brandishing her top-of-the-line laptop. “This makes things so much easier. Beatfreak, scurry your butt over here!”
Beatfreak scuttled over. She was now in the form of a norn that looked remarkably like Eduardo, probably because of Bloo. “What?” She asked, turning her baseball cap round so that the visor stuck out the back.
“We have to summon Symia and everyone else.” Draconorn winked.
“Oh! You do actually have your compy then?” Beatfreak grinned, changing into a giant cat (still wearing her hat and earrings.)
“Yes, this thing is the answer to everything.” Draconorn replied, opening the laptop lovingly and turning it on. “Lets see, enum string blah blah…properties…” The Hand muttered as she typed. “Aha!”
A swirling vortex appeared next to her. “Guys, if you want to go home now’s your chance!” Draconorn shouted over to the norns.
“Nah, we’re having too much fun!” Aaron giggled, surrounded by little sketchy imaginary friends. He had said that before Bloo whacked him round the head with a cricket bat, though.

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/8/2007

:3 I have a character for a Web Comic-to-be named Aaron... He pilots the Edelweise! A lovingly crafted Airship.

But he's Human, your Aaron is a norn. And a cute one at that. :P


Yo.
 
KC11

KC11


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  3/8/2007

Please post more soon! Pleasepleaseplease!



Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/9/2007

“Well, if you got it right…” Beatfreak grabbed a piece of pipe and approached the warp hole, sticking the end of the pipe in and yelling into the other end “Hey! Neverwinter, Sahkmet, Symia, Julia, Awmanman, Shann, Evilsprit, KC11 and Bonnieshee… Get over here! Now!”
There was a few seconds of silence and then out of the warp burst the strangest group anyone had ever set eyes on.
A bruin norn splattered with yellow paint and munching a banana; a lion headed lady with a spear, a giant rat with a cookie just as big, a harlequin norn, a large shiny robot, two dragons and a funny coloured Mewtwo all stood in front of them, waving and greeting their friends.
“Why 3:00 in the morning?” Symia groaned, stifling a yawn. It was very early in the morning in Banana World.
Evilspirit and Beatfreak had given each other a hi-five, and Neverwinter waddled over to Draconorn, chewing the biscuit. “Wassup, Drac? Why did you drag us all the way out here?”
“Guys.” Draconorn looked round at her companions very seriously. “We’ve got a BIG project.”

Chapter Two - The norns save Foster’s

The Hands were always disappearing in and out of the warp over the next few days, to hunt down an empty spot where they could build the new world.
“How do you ‘build a world’?” Bloo had asked scathingly. “I want to see some proof before I get all ‘wooyaythey’remakingacoolasgame!’”
“It’s quite simple really, if you know how. You just need to write a huge story, write everything you can think of about your world and strain your brain. After that you just use a bit of CAOS scripting, magic and imagination and poof! It’s like making an imaginary friend.” Draconorn explained carefully, and winked.
“We’ve found a spot, just a big blank rip in time not far from your world, Drac.” KC11 suddenly appeared in a flash of light (Eduardo fainted) with a grin on her dragon snout.
“Great! I’ll get over there.” Draconorn stood up with her laptop and vanished off through another portal.


 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/10/2007

I'm a lion-headed lady? Woah, is my mustache that noticable? Lol, j/k.

Edit: *Pokes picture 422 in the Fan Art section* That's my 'CC self'. I guess it does look somewhat feline-ish. I draw cats alot.


Yo.
 
KC11

KC11


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  3/11/2007

If it is okay.... can I write a fanfic in the Gameware Forums that has a basis on this? (The idea that people will be in it, I seriously want to kick this annoying users behind, be it in a fiction sense :D . Naw, I really just like the idea of this.)

Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/11/2007

You're not the lion headed lady Bonnieshee!!! That's sahkmet. You're a dragon, there's meant to be three but I counted wrong.

KC11 you can write a fanfic like this if you want, but all the worlds like Malurien, etc,etc are not to be copied. Unless of course you're actually writing about Malurien.

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/11/2007

:P 'Kay. Am I a pretty dragon? 8)

Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/12/2007

((You're a sparkling white dragon like your RPG self. Be happy :)))
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Weeks later, she was showing the strain and so was everyone else. The potato soup had been replaced by boiled cabbage, heaps of the colourless mush, so the imaginary friends were getting thinner.
The Hands such as Draconorn, Beatfreak and Shann were getting gaunter too, because of the stress. Despite Draconorn’s words, it wasn’t so easy after all.
“I-can’t-get-the-stupid-character-interaction-
thingy-to-WORK!” Draconorn hissed through her teeth one day, hammering away at her laptop.
It wasn’t just stress making her thinner, she had to eat the cabbage too because for some reason the warp wouldn’t connect to Imperial Albia and let her back.
A skinny, pole-like Awmanman stalked past with an armful of glass canisters that had bits of genetics and CAOS data in them. Symia had run out of bananas, and tried to grow more with the power of her mind. She got a wilted pansy instead. Evilspirit and Shann were spending their time firing random questions about cartoons at unsuspecting passers by.
The Electronornz Halo band members were the only people having fun, as the money they earned from playing on the street was enough to buy them a buffet every day. They offered some to Draconorn, but she refused saying “It’s your hard earned money, you keep it.”
Draconorn snapped her computer shut rather violently in anger and it sparked, so she had to flip it back again to check for damage. “It’s okay… hang on a second! Something’s happened!” She scanned the screen. “It’s all come right! It’s working! It must’ve pressed some buttons when I slammed it shut.”
Without waiting to explain exactly what had happened, she rushed off into the warp.
She didn’t come back for hours, but finally her silver-haired self leapt back out of a portal. “Spark! Lu! Koda! Max! Nisha! I need you to play your very best the next few days. If you can earn enough money, we’ll be able to build the clinic!”


 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/13/2007

:3 Fweea! Imma pwetty white dragon.

Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/15/2007

((Take that Symia XD Pansy grower))
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Everyone in the band nodded solemnly, and the next day they trooped off to their usual spot on the street.
They came back in the evening with a good haul, and discovered that all the Hands had spent the day refining the game/world, and named it.
“The world is called Malurien and is divided into many countries, or zones. The zones are colour coded and have their own name, element and ruler. Players have to work through, solve puzzles, blah, blah and defeat the ruler to move onto the next zone.” Said Beatfreak, reeling off what she had written of the game description.
Mac saw a piece of paper next to Beatfreak that had the information on the zones:


Green - Elysium, ruled by Kalia
Blue - Aqualantis, ruled by Hydra the Wise
Red - Kanovar, ruled by Drezicus
Purple - Nimbus Irium, ruled by Iris the Swift One
Gold - Tabur Nen, Ruled by Taaku Hai
Grey - Mortmarium, ruled by Noxio
Black - Unani Ynas, ruled by Yllamar

Just the thought of places colour coded grey and black made Mac shiver.
“OK, so we got all the…ah, locals, sorted?” Draconorn asked, looking up from her laptop screen.
“Yep, specially imported from, places.” Awmanman replied as he polished the metal on his robotic forearm.
“Places?” Mac asked, sitting down and joining the circle they had formed on the lawn.


“We didn’t create all of the creatures and characters, some are from other worlds. They volunteered, of course, and had their memories modified so they think they’ve always been in Malurien.” Draconorn explained. “Oh, you have got to play this when we’ve built the warping equipment.”
Draconorn sounded excited, so Mac started getting excited too. “I want to play it n-“ He began, but Sahkmet cut across him.
“You can’t play now! The security and safety measures haven’t been activated yet, the monsters would pummel you!”
“Yeah, the point of the game is to scare players into thinking they’ll get hurt, so they say the leaving password and get disqualified.” Symia added through a mouthful of pansynana.
“What’s the leaving password?” Spike asked, hobbling over (his leg was set in a cast).
“Queer Quit” Draconorn said, looking up again. “You’d better remember that, because even with all the security measures and firewalls the monsters can still give you a black eye.”
“If you manage to get all the way through, from landing in Elysium to defeating the big boss at the end of Unani Ynas, you get a cool prize.” Beatfreak grinned.
“Prize?” Asked Mac, eyes glinting.
“You get a bit of prize money, but if you get on the high scores you get a way better prize.” Beatfreak answered “But you have to get all the way through the game, and it’s not easy. You just wait until you see the big boss at the end.”
This interesting discussion ended abruptly when Spark marched up triumphantly, dropped a moneybag at Draconorn’s feet and yelled “Ta da!”
“Wow!” Draconorn exclaimed. “How the heck did you fundraise all we needed in one day?”
“Animal magnetism, and a few rounds of Coconutz and No Sunny Skies.” Nisha winked.
“Awesome….” Bonnieshee said, awed.


 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/18/2007

“Awesome….” Bonnieshee said, awed

XD IT'S JUST LIKE ME!

*Pats DEMENSION self*

Okay, now... You try to take over the world in your spare time, or else I'll come in there and punch your face. :3

D-Self: o_o;


Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/19/2007

*Is very scared and sends Bonnieshee to an asylum*
I don't have any more story to post!!! D:
I need to write more.

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/24/2007

*Is forced into a 'Self-Hugging' jacket and is dragged off into an Asylum*

BonnieShee: BAH! *Chews arms off and hides behind Draconorn*

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Whoops, anyway... I like what I've read so far, Draconorn. Although... I wouldn't mind at all if I had a few more lines... *Ahem* :D (chatspeak) ur teh awsom, draconorn.(/chatspeak)


Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  3/24/2007

You'll get more lines, don't worry.
There's a bit when most of the Hands get captured and locked in silver cages (Hands are weakened by silver if imprisoned by it, in DIMENSION)
That's when you give them the full extent of your vocabulary and shout the ears off your kidnappers XD

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  3/26/2007

*SQUEAK!* Awesome. I love my vocabulary, so... so rainbow-colored. So prettiful. >:D

Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  4/6/2007

Symia disguised herself as a normal human and went out to hire some builders and buy materials. Some things had to be specially imported from one of the Hand’s worlds in secret, such as warp-proof mythril.
The builders constructed the building very well but had no idea what to do with the mythril, so the Hands packed them off and finished the building themselves. This caused the whole thing to fall down again and they had to call the builders back and work together as a team.
Eventually, they finished.
It was a prim, clinical white building. The room at the front was the front desk and waiting room, at the back was a special connection room where people from Malurien could come in, and at the centre of the building was a small room that contained the warp machine.
The official unveiling was to be that Saturday, and leaflets were handed out to people passing by on the street. A lot of people seemed interested and excited, and it wasn’t long before the entire city was buzzing with gossip.
“Mac! Hey Mac!” Draconorn ran up to Mac one day, excited. “We’re handing out jobs now, and we need a ‘police force’, or moderators, to make sure people are safe and don’t harass the inhabitants of Malurien. There’s a spare time slot, do you want the job?”
“Me? A moderator?” Mac said, awed. He imagined himself with a shock stick and uniform, parading round a jungle and giving any troublemakers a good zap.
“You don’t want to?” Draconorn said sadly, looking rather crestfallen.
“Whaddaya mean? Of course I want to!” Mac started jumping round happily.
“Well, it’s not just you. In a watch there’s a pair of mods, which means you need a partner. Go pick someone reliable, okay?” Draconorn smiled and tucked her clipboard under her arm as Mac raced away.
“I betcha he’s gonna choose that Bloo fellow.” Awmanman grumbled darkly.
“Yeah I know. But Mac’s sensible, he’ll be fine.”
“What?! He’s an eight-year-old kid!”
“I have utter faith in him, he’s very smart for his age.” Draconorn said bluntly, sticking her snout in the air.
“Whatever you say.” Awmanman sighed, knowing the topic was closed.

Saturday morning seemed to arrive very, very quickly.
It was long, because the Hands had to explain the rules and regulations.
“Don’t tease the monsters.” Draconorn announced, holding up a finger.
“Ya’d better listen ta her too, or she’ll bite cha head off.” Bonnieshee said, putting on a strange accent and making Draconorn giggle while she was trying to read more.
“Who cares! Let’s cut the ribbon!” Shann turned her arm into a massive pair of scissors (making the crowd gasp), rushed up to the ribbon tied across the entrance and cut it in half.
The crowd suddenly surged forward, shunting everyone inside.
“Hey! No biz today! Come back tomorrow!” Bonnieshee yelled, and ushered them all out again.

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  4/8/2007

Whoa, biz? I didn't know I talked like that.

Atleast, not while I'm sane... XD


Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  4/9/2007

You do in my story, it gives you a bit of character. I'm talking all boring (and later on being depressed) while you're talking... um, gangster?
It's going to get really exciting soon!
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Draconorn went into the manor, thinking as she went.
“Hi Drac.” Mac said as she walked past.
“Hiya Mac!” Draconorn grinned, but it promptly turned into a look of shock as a loud roar echoed through the house.
A huge lion rushed down the stairs and threw itself on Draconorn.
“Help! I’m being eaten by a lion!” She shrieked.
“You’re not being eaten!” Mac laughed. “You’re being hugged!”
“Oh, Gremlin! I missed you so much! I thought you were dead.” The lion squealed, then backed off Draconorn so she could stand up.
“Who are you?” Draconorn said, dazed.
“You don’t remember me?” The lion said sadly, and it suddenly shrunk to about three times the size of a cat. Now it was sitting still, it was clear it had lots of fiery red hair, a red scruff of fur round its neck, red paws and a bushy red tail.
“Gremlin? What are you talking about Simba?” Mac said to the lion. “She died two years ago. This is Draconorn, from Imperial Albia.”
“But… she sounds just like her.” Simba the lion whispered, crestfallen.
“Don’t know you, pussy.” Draconorn said shortly. “But you make something tug at my memory. A legend says that Hands aren’t born, a person who is worthy becomes one when they die. Maybe you know me from my previous life? Well, if you actually believe those old legends”
“But you’re 5000 years old! Gremlin died two years ago!” Mac protested irritably.
Draconorn shrugged. “Time runs differently in the world of Creatures. Anything’s possible.”
Simba cracked into a huge, toothy grin. “Then you are Gremlin!”
“Why do you keep calling me Gremlin? Who are you?” Draconorn asked, confused.
“Gremlin, you, were my best friend… before it happened. Gremlin was your nickname, among others like Godzilla, Frizzy and... Draconorn.” Mac shuffled his feet nervously. “Simba here was your imaginary friend.”
“I… had an imaginary friend?” Draconorn asked. She sounded really sad.
“She’s right here.” Mac pointed at the lion.
“And… you were my best friend?”
“Yeah.”
“Hey Drac! You need to go and check something out in Malurien! It’s evolved all by itself, it has a different timeframe! Someone could spend a week in there, come back out and it’s been only half an hour here!” Bonnieshee came stomping loudly and happily into the hall, then stopped at the look on Draconorn’s face. “Drac?”
“Leave me alone, I need time to think.” Draconorn whispered, and left without another word.

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  4/9/2007

Hmm, boring and depressed sounds more like my sane self. :D Lolz, this is getting better and better, Draconorn. Or should I say, Drac?

Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  4/10/2007

(It gets better when the trouble starts. Ratchet and Clank get press ganged into Yllamr's army and you find out that Drac, the Maulrien one of course :$, got left at the altar by Aaron. Bwahaha! Plot spoilers)
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“Hi, um, Simba.” Draconorn cautiously approached the giant cat.
“Hi Drac.” Simba said, using Draconorn’s name.
“Well, if you are my imaginary friend, I guess we should…um, hang out? I can’t remember anything. It’s been, what, 5000 years? And I’m sure Hands get their memories wiped every 1000 years.”
Simba smiled and gave the Hand a lion hug.
“We’d better go and keep an eye on Malurien, the very first group is going in.” KC11 came up and dragged the two away.
“Mac! You can go in! Grab a weapon and your partner, and get Awmanman to zap you in!” Draconorn yelled across the yard before she was dragged into the warp room by KC11 to do her shift.
“YES!!” Mac and Bloo raced towards the building, knocking over Spike as they went, rushed in, grabbed a weapon each (Mac got a nice big truncheon, Bloo got a sling shot) and went into the warp room.
“Right, here we go.” Awmanman said dully.
He pressed a few buttons and the machine started rumbling. It seemed like an ominous sound, and Bloo got weird vibes from it.
Mac felt dwarfed, since the warp ray towered over him, and the silver, pristine and clean walls made him feel like a guinea pig on a lab table.
“Close your eyes, because the light might blind you, hold Bloo tight to stop you from getting separated and keep all limbs inside the vehicle.” Awmanman announced as he grabbed a lever.
“Wha?” Mac cried incredulously.
“Sorry, just had to say that.” Awmanman grinned and gave the lever an almighty pull.
There was a blaze of bluish light from the ray gun, and the whole room rattled.
Mac and Bloo felt a queer sensation of motion while standing still, and suddenly they appeared in a forest, four feet off the ground. They landed with a thump.
“Wow!” Mac and Bloo said at the same time. The forest was… different. The trees were unlike any they had ever seen, and the weirdest creatures walked past as they carried out their everyday jobs.
“Pika!” Squealed a little voice. Looking down, Mac saw a pikachu grinning up at him and waving. It was so cute that he picked it up and cuddled it, even though he was more of the type of kid to play with toy soldiers.
Bloo, however, was more interested in a dragon that was sitting and eating massive fruit off an even bigger tree.
A tree further away suddenly moved, revealing itself to be a Copycat (a creature that shape changes to scare people for fun). It changed into a rock, and then rolled away.
“Hi guys!” A brunette woman walked up to the two with a broad grin. “It’s me, Draconorn.” Simba trotted up behind her. “This place is so awesome.” The lioness said, looking around.
“I agree.” Mac smiled.
“Well, I’ve got this shift handled. Maybe you guys can take a look around, learn a bit more about Malurien?” Draconorn suggested.
Bloo rushed away, and Mac followed.
“Bloo! Calm down, there’s could be something nasty around here.” Mac panted as he tried to catch Bloo before anything happened to him.
“Let’s actually play the game!!!” Bloo shrieked excitedly, and started running round in circles.
“Bloo, we can’t! We’re responsible for the people who play, we have to do our job as moderators!”
“Didn’t you hear Drac? She said she had it under control.”
Mac gave in to Bloo’s pleading with a sigh. “I suppose, but do you even know what we’re supposed to do?”
“Well, players are supposed to follow a path to find a clue that tells them what they need to do for the first world, I heard Drac say so once.” Bloo said, rubbing his non-existent chin.
“Sometimes I’m really glad you like to eavesdrop on people.”
“Me too.”
So they hunted around for a while until they came across a paved path. “Are you sure this is the right one?” Mac said doubtfully.
“It’s paved, so it must be the one!” Bloo said impatiently, and zoomed away down the path.
“Bloo!” Mac stumbled after him.
The path stopped abruptly at the edge of a deep, murky river. A line of giant lily pads stretched from one bank to the other.
“Easy peasy!” Bloo grinned, and started hopping from pad to pad. Mac followed, but he felt uneasy. It was almost as if there was a nasty tune playing in the background. ‘Dun, dun, dun, dun…’ The river surface rippled suddenly, as if something glided past in the water.
At that moment, a huge pair of jaws burst out of the river. “AAAAAH!” Mac jumped to the next lily pad, just in time, as the mouth clamped down on the pad Mac was on and dragged it down. The massive jaws belonged to a ten-foot long crocodile.

 
KC11

KC11


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  4/10/2007

I really love this story! Any point where I do more than pull people to do their shifts?

Do not upset the ugly worm, lest it be a dragon in disguise. (>oo)>

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  4/10/2007

*Chuckles* Any point where I do more than spazz out? Lolz.

Yo.
 
Draconorn

Draconorn



  4/11/2007

It's really hard giving so many characters inmportant parts in the story... umm, KC11, maybe you can be like a super spy agent or something later on when they find out that Yllmar is a bad guy? Bonnieshee, there will be a bit when you find your true love. Bwahaha!
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Mac jumped as fast as he could to the riverbank, where Bloo was rolling around with laughter. “What’s so funny?” Mac asked indignantly.
“THAT WAS AWESOME!” Bloo screamed.
“Well, that’s the most dangerous game of hop-scotch I’ve ever played.” Mac grumbled and looked back to see the crocodile floating there, glaring at him.
They continued on their way.
Half an hour later, Bloo tripped on something and found that the path stopped.
In the middle of nowhere, the stones just ended with one big one. After that was just dirt and leaves.
“What?” Bloo yelled angrily.
“There’s something written on the last stone.” Mac pointed out, and read the inscription out:

Game players, travellers, don’t you know?
To defeat Kalia where you must go
Travel Elysium, from top to toe
And catch a pokemon, from all six zones
Six pokemon, one from each so…
Ready travellers, off you go!

“It seems we have to catch one, um… pokemon from each of the six areas of Elysium.” Mac said, looking at the map carved below the verse. “Let’s see… there’s the Heather Plains, Walker’s Woods (which is where we are), the Jungle of Defiance, Hunt-less Hills, The Delta and Tree City.”
“Well, let’s go catch a pokemon thingy then!” Bloo grinned.
“Yes, but how?” Mac frowned.
“Um… with those maybe?” Bloo pointed with an uncertain expression on his face. A sign nailed to a tree said ‘pokeballs’, and a bag was hanging from it. In the bag were six shiny red and white balls.
Mac took the bag of pokeballs, and then he and Bloo went in search of a tough pokemon.
It wasn’t long before a little Jigglypuff burst out at them from a bush.
“Nah, too small.” Bloo grumbled and moved on.
Another pikachu waved at them from a tree branch. “ Too cute.” Said Bloo, again.
ROOOOOOOAAR!
“That’s better!” Bloo grinned while Mac squealed and jumped out of the way. A huge Nidoqueen sat on Bloo, flattening him. “Hrrelp mree!” Bloo’s muffled voice came from beneath the dinosaur-like pokemon’s bottom.
Mac had no idea what to do with the pokeballs, so he threw one randomly at the Nidoqueen’s head. And it worked!
The Nidoqueen looked shocked as the ball smacked into its nose, there was a burst of light, and then it was gone.
“Well, that was… normal.” Mac said and went to get the pokeball.
“Now we have to walk for ages to get to the Heather plains!” Bloo complained, and started stamping on the ground in the beginnings of a tantrum.
“I can give you a lift.” Said a voice, and Bloo was frightened so much that he did a bellyflop backwards. Mac raised his truncheon, just in case.
A man stepped out from behind a tree.


He was tall, with a slim, muscly figure. His ears were extremely long, betraying him as some kind of elf; his hair was a yellow blonde, growing green towards the hair roots, his eyes were a cold, steely blue and they looked pretty fierce because his green eyebrows slanted down in an almost constant frown.
He was wearing a suit of chain mail, and over the top of that he had spiky steel pauldrons (armour for the shoulders and upper arms), bracers (forearms), and chest armour.
Mac noticed he had plenty of weapons too; a long-sword in a leather scabbard on his belt and two guns strapped to his back. His thick leather boots were metal tipped as well, so Mac knew that a kick from this guy would be pretty painful.
“Sorry, I just couldn’t help watching you two catch that Nidoqueen. Man, you’re rookies. First time ever in Malurien, I guess?” The man said with an amused smile, leaning on the trunk of a tree.
“Yeah.” Mac said warily. “Why do you want to give us a lift? Why should we trust you?”

 
Savverz

Savverz


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  4/12/2007

Oh! Heather Plains? I love heather. Heather is my middle name! Seriously. Next to Skye, that is... Yeah. Heather Skye!

Wait... Did you say True Love? Who is that? Is he cute? Is he a character I know? Is he a Librarian? Does he Pilot a Cargo Ship called the Edelweiss?

Is he human?
Is his name Aaron?


Yo.
 

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